No Tears

The end is near Your soul sheds no tears Prithee, why do you fear?

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Ann Foster

Date: 11/22/2019 3:58:00 PM

Do not... fear... Excellent write. As always, your pen is sharp... Ann

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/23/2019 7:46:00 PM

Thank you for noticing Ann. I try to keep my pen sharp, so it matches the point on the top of my old head. Smiles, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/18/2019 4:58:00 AM

I love the unknown, prancing around it in a delighted, crazed way.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2019 1:42:00 PM

You are a stitch, Caren. Unique, for sure!! :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/17/2019 3:10:00 PM

the fear of the unknown gets people all the time...they know not what to expect .. good write :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2019 5:54:00 PM

Excellent point, as death is precisely that, fear of the unknown, plus much more of course---yet that's the root of the problem. Thank you so much for your perceptive comment! :) gw

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 11/17/2019 9:46:00 AM

Prithee! Like it :3 Thanks for a new one in my vocabulary)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2019 1:52:00 PM

Prithee fits in right after 'presley' and 'parsley.' :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/17/2019 5:46:00 AM

Never heard that word ( pray thee) it will be if those lunatics get their hands on nuclear weapons. Tom

Na Na

Date: 11/16/2019 11:44:00 PM

Hi Gershon. I like how you used the word Prithee, I actually used the same word earlier today. The other person was like huh?? I told him I was conveying a polite request. He still couldnt figure it out lol. Anyways nice poem. Thanks for sharing

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2019 1:50:00 PM

And just who was that 'other person,' prithee?! (Just kidding, of course). Thanks, Gregory. Best wishes Gershon