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No Sunny Rays Daring To Blast This Heart In Me

No Sunny Rays Daring To Blast This Heart In Me I can not write any good words this saddest day no rice in the pudding , no pitchfork in the hay. Morning dawned with its usual bright shining glee no sunny rays daring to blast this heart in me. There were bees in the garden, sunshine on the corn kids playing in the yard, me sad at being born. No clouds flying, no hard pelting rain to crash down yet here I sit my forlorn face wearing a frown. My thoughts wander into happy days in my past great loves destroyed, treasures not ever meant to last. There comes the black cloud, dark one in its fated role another curse eating my tired, unhappy soul. I can not write any good words this saddest day no rice in the pudding , no pitchfork in the hay. Robert J. Lindley, 4-30-2016 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 Total # Syllables: 168 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 136 NOTE--SONNET 12 ON 12...

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Date: 4/30/2016 4:31:00 PM
I know how you must feel, Robert, but even so you are still capable of finding the right words! Much enjoyed, my friend. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:14:00 PM
I know poetry cannot be taught to people but one day I would love to write a sonnet like you.. Trust me , you are the best with sonnets... 7/7... Hugs Red
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:01:00 PM
Good writing and I sure relate to the content. I enjoyed the expressions showcasing 'dark cloud' mood. You may enjoy a sorta similar one I posted very recently, "My Lethargic Limits." Glad I stopped by - been quiet awhile - but I love 'therapy' writes and the punches they pack which this felt like to me ... CayCay
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