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in the darkness we stumble and in the light we stray,without a map; storms hurricane us,whirlwinds surround,engulf by chance, in a fog of despair,we cry,deny bewail our circumstance.Blame name,Him,her whoever,in our pain; reflection calms the shame,yet still we continue in this game.. without a map inspired by Debbie's contest

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Date: 5/24/2011 10:15:00 AM
LOL, a wonderfully deep write. Thanks, Brian - your contest was huge fun : )
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:22:00 PM
eloquent lines Brian ..so true to life .. humans always looking for someone else to blame for shortcomongs and disappointments in this realm... the map to me is the Word of God ..with that in our hands we have a great guide.. hope u are enjoying a terrific Sunday my friend ..luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:09:00 AM
Good one..In life, the storms do come..Good luck in the contest..It reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the placement in your contest..I know that it is difficult to chose the winners when there are so many good ones written...I read many of the entries and there was good ones..Sara
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