No Remedy We Have To Return

My husband has always loved 
The African bush and the wild,
From the time he was only a child,
So, when he was old enough in his late teens,
Persuaded Andre a school friend, 
That the bush was serene,
But hubby did not expect a disaster so unforeseen.
It was Winter, the month of July,
That they left for this trip,
Both excited, Andre apprehensive of 
Being in winter’s bitter grip. 
Spiders were about galore, they saw baboons
A jackal, and snakes on every path they took,
And one Andre accidentally trod on with his foot.
Well, hell hath no fury as the wrath
Of a hibernating snake,
Which viciously with all its venom 
Bit Andre with might,
His scream was one of pain and fright,
Do something quickly he cried.	
Neither had anticipated this, 
Hubby had to find
Help, he hastened along a beaten track, 	
Having assured Andre, he would soon be back.
He found kindred souls who loved the wild 
As much as he, lo and behold one was a doctor.
Andre related the story to this doctor,
He shocked her, 
Immediately she said, go back and suck
Out the poison,
The snake you described that struck
Your friend, is poisonous but not 
To any great extent,
You could retrace your steps
Along the same path,
Hubby whispered in the doctor’s ear, 
Where the snake with wrath
Had bit Andre, she laughed aloud, 
Well, you have to choose what to do,
It must be one of the two.
Hubby slowly returned, giving himself
Time to ponder and review,
Her prognosis, for one of the two options, 
He certainly was going to discount,
The one of sucking the poison out,
Without a shadow of doubt,
The snake had bit Andre on his willy!
He returned to his friend who looked pale,
Who or what did you find, 
A doctor, who advised something silly,
What did he say,
Well, said hubby, today is not your day,	
We must return right away,
Andre only seventeen began to cry, 
Hubby declared, 
If we don’t, you will surely die!
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Horsman Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 7:45 PM
THis site is such a wonderful place, with so many poet from different parts of the planet, three that exceed in learning curve poetry, from different continents. Lindsay Lauie, here in Australia, Tom Cunningham, UK and yourself in South Africa. And apologies to those i love and missed. Jennifer this is brilliant, love it. Harry
Baker Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 8:27 AM
What a story, what a poem. Laughs and tears for the friend. Great presentation through your poetic gifts, Jennifer. Very enjoyable read. Have a great week! Bill
Kiser Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Oh my! Now that's definitely a bad predicament! I hope Andre healed well. It made for a very interesting read though. Well penned.
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:52 PM
oh my, did you make this up, jennifer? I can't imagine a friend not doing what was needed. I thought the kid would die if the poison was not sucked out right away. What a story you told us!! (and how did the spider, trod upon, jump up to a guy's willy? hahaha)
Proxenos Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 12:42 AM
Hi Andrea, how are you my friend, he had to suck the snakes (not spider) poison out which snake stood up into a striking position and struck and bit him on his willy, well that is not done by a teenager boy for another teenager, boy, and the doctor did tell him it was not a very poisonous bite so to return home was also OK. Guess when you are older you become wiser, bolder and more compassionate. Hope you have an awesome Valentines day my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 9:34 PM
hahaha, poor Andre, shame on hubby not to do his duty. Love it Jen....
Poet Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Jenny, Excellent at changing the tone from a potentially hazardous scenario to one that is both amusing and educational. I sincerely hope that I will never be in such a situation. Beautifully written narration... It was a pleasure to read.
DiMino Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Yep, friendship has it limits. So much for the doctor's oath -- seems even she drew the line somewhere along the path:) Well told. Joe.
Vangaveti Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Oh your words tied me up and I was stuck to my seat here dying to know what happened next! How well you have changed the gear from a threatening scene to land on a humorous note!
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 6:20 PM
Whoa. You really gave me the 'willies' with this narrative, Jennifer. What a wild one! ~ Gershon
Brown Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 4:48 PM
Love the story Jennifer that was quite a twist at the end (LoL). Enjoyed reading. Thanks for the smile. Hugs ~ Debra
Watt Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Funny tale told with your signature flair, Jennifer. I hope I am never put in that position, ha ha! I loved your rhyme of doctor and shocked her. Blessings and hugs ~ John
Kannan Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Great story and I loved how you explained the scary story in a funny way ... Lovely narration... Enjoyed reading it...
Cunningham Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Lol, you find out who your friends are. Hope you're well Jennifer. Tom
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