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No Poem As Lovely

”I think that I shall never see A poem as lovely as a tree. Poems are made by fools like me, But only God can make a tree." Joyce Kilmer I think it’s as Joyce Kilmer wrote on trees so lovely made, expounding through their seasoned lives of change, except in fall. In summer their full beauty bursts forth in lush abound. Yet it’s in their dying colors that poet souls are thrilled. Quickly my head turns to look at yellow, red, brown hues, a sunlit hillside palette. But cautiously I drive. Oh, to be a passenger with eyes free to absorb, the splendor of the trees in fall, that die in Godly grace. Showering bands of leaves descend in paths to lead me on. No longer must I turn away from safety just to see. Filling my mind with vain desire to poetry nature’s trees, I understand as Kilmer did. No poem fairer than these. 10/17/2022 Fall Flavors' Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh Theme: Taking a fall drive

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Date: 10/26/2022 7:05:00 PM
I'm a great lover of flowers and trees myself Janis. I was just in Gatlinburg, Tennessee for my oldest daughter's wedding. The leaves could not have been more beautiful in the Smokey Mountains. I don't know where you live, but where I live in Florida we don't mark the changing of the seasons with the changing of the leaves but with the blooming of the flowers.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:31:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously feel how is it to "take a fall drive" with delight since I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:36:00 AM
Janis, back with congratulations on your win! So happy to see this on the winners list! Joyful blessings of the season to you.
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:35:00 AM
Oh my Janis. This is so soft and sweet and a great tribute to our beautiful trees and nod to Kilmer. Thank you and congratulations on your win. Linda Alice
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/24/2022 8:02:00 AM
Thanks and blessings to you Linda. I appreciate the time you took to read the poem and comment. Janis
Date: 10/17/2022 8:52:00 PM
Well written poem, Janis, and love the avatar. Yes, the beauty of a tree is so beautiful. Color change of nature kind of beautiful, but also depressing when it leaves the tree just totally undressed. The death of a color green to turn the many dyeing colors. Many blessings my friend
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/24/2022 8:04:00 AM
Eve, good to hear words of thanks from you, my friend. May you continue to receive blessings of favor from the Lord. Thank you. Janis
Date: 10/17/2022 1:15:00 PM
Amen, Janis! Only our wonderful, whimsical God would think to turn a green leaf orange, or scarlet or umber! What a miracle we experience every autumn - a gift, a heavenly blessing. Thank you for this beautiful poem of praise. Sending you all the blessings of the season! So nice ti again experience your lovely poetry.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/17/2022 1:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Sam for your encouraging comment. I pray your continued blessings and favor from God. Janis

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