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No Place For An Eagle

Unable to grasp the the context
Despite her greatest resolve
The Queen Bee frowns at her, vexed
Into the background my girl dissolves

Hive order is a nasty one
Mean girls, stingers in back
Each social stratum is hard-won
Her skills of nuance do lack

Their fell dance she does not get
Not made to bow to throne
Forever on the outside, yet
Safe, hidden, and alone

From lonely heights she sees
Hot updraft carries higher
Her mind flowing with an ease
Than the hive could never aspire

So safe, but wishes she weren’t
Within abides crimson yearning
Others to share the current
While below, vanities burning

4/30/16
© Thomas W. Quigley
For my Daughter, who shares the family "gift"--
The mixed blessing of an independent mind,
and its social challenges.
For further elaboration, see my poem "Of Asses and Burgers"

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Date: 5/9/2016 10:02:00 PM
Thanks dad. I teared up a little when I read it was about me. Thank you very much for writing this. I love that we see the same thing but through different eyes, and with different words. i love you!!!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/9/2016 10:40:00 PM
:-))) Love you too, sweetie!!
Date: 5/9/2016 4:42:00 PM
congrat on your win in the contest with this deep poem
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/9/2016 10:40:00 PM
Thanks, BW!
Date: 5/9/2016 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Tom. ~kc~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/9/2016 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, KC!
Date: 5/8/2016 6:49:00 PM
tom, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/8/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thanks Linda! Glad to see you "back," whatever the heck that was...
Date: 5/8/2016 5:05:00 PM
Tom, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog, "American Dream." if you'd like. Hope you are enjoying your day. Happy Mother's Day **SKAT**
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Date: 4/30/2016 4:59:00 PM
such a wonderful poem you have composed, Tom. :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/30/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!

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