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No One Lives His Life

Born with a silver spoon in mouth, Brought up royal, tamed in discipline, Childhood joys were living in a dream, Every stage of my grappling life, Was a huge blow to my very being. An always ought to prove myself situation, Books and hard work made me scream, Sublime artist inside me died and cried, Smile of success masked my inside fight, Dancing to the tunes of the master planner, He thwarted even the best of my rhymes, To live and live and feign content, Have beauty on face, weep may inside, Await the moment I finally make peace, Will begin my struggle free immortal life, In life, no one ever lives his own life !! Written on 24/4/14 Sponsor- Mystic rose

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Date: 5/1/2014 10:25:00 AM
No matter the threads that we are born with. We are all born.
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Date: 4/26/2014 3:40:00 AM
The last line is absolutely true. It is thought provoking, good luck in the contest. Thnx for stopping by and making me happy with your valued words.
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Date: 4/24/2014 10:12:00 PM
so very interesting. This is you?? I guess you are partially right in your last line but I like to think I am living mostly the way I want to be living!! I will have to check what this contest. A good entry for her.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2014 10:36:00 PM
Andrea this is not me,,,i cant believe it cud be me ever,,, its been fun to imagine on all negatives of life for the subject ,,,,,but yes the last line definitely i feel would be real me,,, free from all desires,,,eternal !
Date: 4/24/2014 12:24:00 PM
A real poem . Best of luck for contest. Hope u will like my poetry.with love -shaista:)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2014 10:37:00 PM
Shaista thanks for ur wishes n kind comments !
Date: 4/24/2014 11:28:00 AM
Smile of success masked my inside fight.. This one catchy line..:) all in all a reflective great write:) God bless to the contest Dr. Upma:) God bless always:) , olive eloisa here with aware of hello :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2014 10:38:00 PM
Olive thanks for beautiful comments n the wishes ! God bless u dear !

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