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No Man

A man that's torn; no face reflects pride we are humbled, forlorn. This land is desolate, seas of sand hypnotize your mind time doesn't stop but it does not exist society's entwined in falling behind. We are designed to rewind. Going back to what we know is what we do first. We thirst for blood and kill what we love. A man that's torn; no face reflects elation we are humbled, complacent. Ignorant, intoxicated. A man that's torn; is no man at all. Because he's torn in half, and is half as tall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/28/2013 2:17:00 PM
Wow a great poem indeed! The last stanza ended the nice piece in a splendid way! Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Date: 10/23/2013 4:12:00 AM
profound and at the same time grounded... this has great intent and purpose... :) huggs
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Date: 10/20/2013 4:38:00 AM
What a great piece. Not only did I learn a lot but also seem to have had a new-found appreciation for my being. The way you executed this airs life lessons in such a way that even most teenagers with short attention span can appreciate!
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:05:00 PM
Well written
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