no heroes - WWI - Premiere Contest Winner

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   heroes?

there are none here, now ... ever ...
      don’t feign to look, for your eyes will
         beg their smiles, true … these are my
   brothers, these weary fools entrenched,
muddy, beside me - there is no one else
      that matters ...

         not now ...

   the sting of mustard gas in our eyes,
the ache of hunger, and the stench of
      necrosis, bind us as surely as blood or
         Bible, and the prospect of mortality
   seals our covenant, birthed in dire
conflict ...

      yet ...

         I consider this place at another time,
   another life and care, (this field of bent
bone and burnt flesh), its feral beauty:
      an August breeze once tickled this
         wheat, I’m sure - a lover's picnic,
   perhaps ...

gingham cloth laid out smartly, a basket 
      of bread and cheese, fresh-picked
         pears and cream, an aged bottle from
   the nearby vineyard, and fresh daises
and blue-bells, pulled, just ...

      or maybe a lazy July eve … aye, the
         belly laughs of children, chasing fireflies 
   with their jelly jars, wishing on each one
caught ... tall blades and blossoms
      staining their play clothes with dewy
         tears of dusk ...

   or perhaps, even, a late December
afternoon - two Morgans pulling a
      sleigh across the drifting, snowy flats,
         headed for a Christmas party ... oh, a
   thousand moments were lived here,
ago ...

      all decidedly more important - more
         vital, and far LESS horrific and vile, than
   these … and any of which I would gift to
these shimmer-eyed boys I love, if I
      could but trade my life for it ...

         this bounding meadow, once heaven's
   delight, is now pregnant with death, red
and rotting, waiting to gasp its last ...
      but who will first bear honored witness
         to these souls, lost and lamenting?

   who will barter the price paid by these
men, once the blood and gas are
      weathered off these gentle, weeping
         grasses? Who will ply this soil for the
   vain anguish given to garish greed?

who will raise a port for our milled
      marrow, when rain and wind have
         washed this hell to silence? Who will
   dampen a cheek? Time cares not for
these lads, who could be home ...
      and happy ...

         spirited boys who should be waiting
   for a bus or a first kiss, not considering
their final moments on this wretched,
      soggy battlement, or bloating in the
         sun, gazes now glazed and dim ... staring.

   no, there are no heroes in war, only the
dead ... and the weary. But these dear
      spirits are my brothers, and their bones
         build a temple of dreams, lost - an
   inglorious garden of crude crosses,
blooming ...

      no bold medals spangle their breasts,
         hushed and still … no garlands dance
   upon their tender brows … no laurels
wait for their observance, but they are
      everything that ties me to home, to
         honor … here, now ...

   always.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 15" Poetry Contest, Mark Toney, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "War" Poetry Contest, Kai Michael Neumann, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/25/2021 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Gregory! Superbly written! ...Fran
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Date: 12/22/2021 6:48:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for courageously exposing war's grim reality' in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 12/22/2021 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write/read. War is so sad for everyone. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
The cost of having too little time to scour these pages is missing out on gems like this. I rarely get on with free verse, Gregory, but this is one splendid write. It’s a shame that our youngest generations will see WW1 as such ancient history that they will view its dead much as we might see those of say, the Napoleonic wars… just a very long time ago. I would have been sincerely happy to have placed behind this entry. Congrats. Terry
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Date: 12/22/2021 9:54:00 AM
An incredibly touching poem. It's difficult to read about war, but you soften it some with the fields' memories. I'm making this a favorite!
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Date: 12/22/2021 8:42:00 AM
"there are no heroes in war, only the dead ... and the weary" - A long very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/22/2021 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 3/30/2021 9:54:00 AM
Powerful lines and images Greg! Amazing use of words in pictures add to the depth of your observations and questions with the deep sense of the futility, pain and sorrow of war. Love the then and now movement of the poem along with the formatting that adds to its intensity. Congratulations on your win! Sending you Easter blessings!
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Date: 2/3/2019 8:07:00 PM
This is so deep and eloquent. Congrats for another first place win, Greg. You sure are giving him your best!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2019 4:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Andrea ... this had only received two comments since last year, so I wasn't sure it would place. Thankfully Mark (and you, Line & Connie) saw the sparkle in it. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/3/2019 7:30:00 PM
Greg, very poignant and heartrending. I see your stride hasn't let up! Congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2019 4:08:00 AM
I am SO honored by this, Mark, and I thank you so sincerely for giving this a bit of exposure and attention ... as you can see it was written a year ago, yet only received two comments, though I have felt this one of my best, and I worked so hard to bring the memory of those nameless boys some honor, (and not just Americans, but all those given to the inane sufferings of war) ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/4/2019 4:08:00 AM
... I took a chance with this because of the lack of comments, but hoped you might see its value. Blessings and thanks to you! :-)
Date: 7/9/2018 6:56:00 PM
WWI, from what I have seen in classes and documentaries was the deadliest war fought with mustard gas that had lasting affects and the inroduction of flame throwers that would test any man's sanity. Your poem of the contrasts of that war that began at about my mother's birth, and killed so many, should be taught to our youth when they don't really think about how things would be had that war been lost. Excellent tribute piece Gregory! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2018 9:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie - yes, 3 1/2 years of hell on earth, and so little is spoken of it today. It was horror incarnate, and the worst war in our history ... I pray it doesn't slip into anonymity, or those lives lost will be for naught. Blessings, Dear Friend! <3
Date: 2/8/2018 6:39:00 PM
Amazing, Gregory. A wonderful read.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 7:46:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Line, and I so appreciate it! (Not sure why this is getting such little love ... war poems not big here, perhaps??) <3
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