No Ease

Captain Kirk told God, "I'm exploring So you are bound to see me soaring But man alive That damn warp drive Sounds worse than Methuselah snoring!"

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Valsa George

Date: 3/8/2022 1:48:00 AM

May be snoring is the reason for the longevity of Methuselah's life ! A topic to be researched ! Indeed a fun write, Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/8/2022 9:57:00 AM

Wow! You are quite a researcher! Aloha!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/29/2021 8:14:00 PM

Talk about 'everlasting snoring!' lol. :) gw

Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/29/2021 1:46:00 PM

Fun as always!

Debra L Brown

Date: 11/28/2021 9:11:00 PM

Methuselah snoring! Funny.. Enjoyed it

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/28/2021 5:11:00 PM

You would think the Enterprise would have a muffler :)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/29/2021 11:05:00 AM

They make mufflers for cars, trucks, vans, scooters, and Harley Davidsons, but who would know that?

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/28/2021 11:18:00 AM

Loved your rhymes, Rico. I never heard Methuselah snoring, but I'll bet it was loud and disturbing.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/30/2021 10:13:00 AM

Prompted by your poem on drums. Hearing Tahitian drums one mile away is enough to start my heart pumping, but I can not tolerate amplified sound! Jesus did quite well without it . . .

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/28/2021 10:25:00 AM

Funny…that old Methuselah!