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No, Don't Look at That

There once was a statue with motion Had been brought to life with a potion It became a bit stiff Almost fell off a cliff So lubed up it's joints with some lotion

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Date: 10/26/2023 7:07:00 PM
A great limerick. You're good at these
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Date: 10/26/2023 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Hilda - I'm more spontaneous humour than jokes but liked having a play with the form. Thanks for reading them all :)
Date: 10/25/2023 5:05:00 PM
Cute! And clever...
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Date: 10/26/2023 11:50:00 AM
I got slightly hooked on these for a moment - I couldn't figure out limericks, then I could but I'll probably forget again haha
Date: 10/25/2023 2:30:00 PM
clever Limerick. Reminded me of oiling the Tin Man in the Wizard of Oz. Anyway, pretty fun, Sara
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Date: 10/25/2023 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Sara

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