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Inside a house on Halloween one night
I woke, not knowing how its heavy door
got shut. I looked around and felt such fright.
Blood was on the ceiling, walls and floor!

I then recalled a presence I had felt
when first I’d gone inside that house of gloom. 
I now recalled blows to my head I’d felt
before I’d passed out in the empty room.

Where did the blood come from? Was this a dream?
I looked, and now a body I could see.
I went to it, then gave a silent scream.
It was a corpse that looked a lot like me!

The body was smashed up. With shock I gasped.
The corpse was no one’s but my very own.
 At last the meaning of it all I grasped . . .
A ghost writer I am and all alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:50 PM
That would shake someone up! Congratulations on your scary write!
Bowring Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Many congratulations dear Andrea on your first place win with this brilliant write. Fantastic title too! The last stanza is amazing but particularly the ending line! Genius. Well done! Hugs and smiles :):)
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Andrea, a great poem and story, love the last stanza, congratulations on your first place win!
Flood Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your delightfully blood spattered win, Andrea. Brings a whole new meaning to the expression ‘I went there to find myself’.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Luckily, Andrea, I only stare at blanks in the wake of taking out the trash! I like this, my friend, with that absolute end Compliments on the placement! Aloha, William
Kauffman Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Andrea! Very creative and extremely spooky with a great play on words at the end! Here's to waking from your Halloween dream! Blessings!
Croft Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 7:38 AM
clever, brilliant write! Well deserved top place! Congrats!!
Daniel Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 5:45 AM
What a clever title for this spooky story!!
Rolland Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 6:37 PM
so clever and surprising ending, after scary images of you as dead, ghost writers can be excellent writer, enjoyed Andrea
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:23 PM
What a cheap shot you take killing off the ghost writer Andrea lol, but a brilliant finale to a viscerally apt Halloween poem, it’s really good, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:22 PM
I'm all about cheap shots. hahaha
DiMino Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Great one! Love it! I am applying for membership, Ghost Writer's Anonymous. Just posted my application – “Old Friends”, check it out. You are a marvelous very inventive writer – always a treat to read. And a lesson in excellent writing. Blessings.
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:18 PM
WoW! Andrea, Good title and content. I found it to be an eerie and spooky type of write. It would make a good horror movie or book. I was not expecting that ending at all. You are a good writer my friend who can write anything! If for a contest, I am convinced you will be on the winners list. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:03 PM
eek this is super scary i love the final stanza lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Narain Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:55 AM
A spooky poem. A ghost coming alive.
May Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:17 AM
A chilling verse Andrea, I like the last line, best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:28 AM
thanks, Joseph
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