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A sudden darkness The communication dead Nothing will work in darkness It is a long wait

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Date: 5/11/2022 1:26:00 PM
True, "Nothing will work in darkness" but this wonderful write. I wish you would write more. Have a great day........................
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2022 4:57:00 PM
Hello Paula, I am working on a pome right now it is not ready to submit. Right nothing works in darkness. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
Date: 9/17/2021 5:04:00 AM
Experienced same situation in the recent Super Cyclonic Storm Amphan. Nicely penned. God bless you.
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:33:00 AM
Hello Pratap Roy, You experienced the same thing in a Cyclonic! i am glad you were not hurt. god bless you.
Date: 8/30/2021 11:07:00 PM
A Tanka contains 5 lines with syllables 5 7 5 7 7. Third or Fourth line is missing.
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Date: 8/31/2021 8:29:00 AM
Hello Anisha yes I see my mistakes thank you. I will chat with you on soup mail. blessings my friend.
Date: 8/20/2021 1:14:00 AM
Every second the internet does not work seems like a million minutes, so this makes sense.
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Date: 8/20/2021 10:58:00 AM
Hello Caren, Yes it does make sense. i t makes it a very long day. Hugs.
Date: 8/12/2021 5:45:00 PM
Geez...I know what you mean. When internet is down I feel cut off from world. Excellent write!
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Date: 8/13/2021 10:43:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, Yes when the internet is cut off we are cut off from the world. It was a very long day all I could do was read with the daylight. Thank you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/12/2021 4:39:00 PM
Well said, Darlene. The recent hurricanes have bypass my island from afar. Only once, lasting a short time, did we go dark, somewhat. It was noon with overcast skies and passing rains. The weatherman said that we're halfway through the hurricane season. Such is life, take care of yourself my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 8/13/2021 10:49:00 AM
Hello William Kekaula, I am happy to hear that the have bypass your island. Oh my goodness, where do you go for protection from the hurricane? Be very careful my friend. loaTake care. Enjoy your day my friend. Aloha!! Darlene.
Date: 8/12/2021 7:48:00 AM
Hi Darlene, I like this precise write. I wanted you to know that in the title there is an i missing, unless it was deliberate?? My computer seems to play tricks on my spelling these days which has gotten so much worse.
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Date: 8/12/2021 10:06:00 AM
Hello Nancy I will correct the title in a while thank you for telling me. Your computer has played tricks on your spelling! i always keep a dictionary handy-accept for this poem it was out of reach. Oh-well. thank you for letting me know. Higs.
Date: 8/12/2021 7:42:00 AM
Hello Darlene, I loved the succinctness, we all need light to function, in any context.
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Date: 8/12/2021 9:59:00 AM
Hello Graham, Hi, Graham, yes we all need light to function in darkness and in any context. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 8/10/2021 12:33:00 PM
Always have a flashlight handy..
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Date: 8/10/2021 3:20:00 PM
Hello Joseph May, yes that is a good idea. thank you. Thankyou for the comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/10/2021 11:16:00 AM
And a very scary possibility - great write, just imagine! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/10/2021 3:21:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, yes it is a scary situation. thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
Date: 8/10/2021 1:53:00 AM
We do have some outages here. Problem I always forget where I put the candles.
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Date: 8/10/2021 3:24:00 PM
Hello victor, You could put them by your beside or somewhere in the kitchen. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/9/2021 1:29:00 PM
Even in the darkness there is life Darlene, funny I used to love power outages when I was a kid, a whole new world opened up for us to play around in, I must do a poem about it someday just like you did, thank you for that spark, cheers David
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Date: 8/9/2021 4:10:00 PM
Hello David Kavangh,yes in the darkness there is life. A quiet one because nothing can be done in the darkness. Yes David it would be nice to see a poem about power failure from you. i look forward to read it. Cheers!! Darlene
Date: 8/9/2021 12:47:00 PM
Light a candle and early to bed Darlene!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2021 4:06:00 PM
Hello Jan, Candles make m nervous. I will get the fake candles instead. Hugs.
Date: 8/9/2021 11:29:00 AM
- I want to light a candle for you, Darlene ... walking in the dark ... is lonely :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2021 11:52:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yesit is. hopefully I hope it won't last too long. I know Iwill see the light at the end of the tunnel. Hugs.
Date: 8/9/2021 4:24:00 AM
How we appreciate the light when it returns and all the dark corners are illuminated...Delice
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Date: 8/9/2021 6:14:00 AM
Hello Delice, yes we do appreciate the light when it returns and corners are illuminated. Enjoy your day Delicae.
Date: 8/9/2021 4:14:00 AM
The light will return Darlene, Hang in there !!! Happy Monday!
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Date: 8/9/2021 6:12:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, Thank you Mike you are right, the light at the end of the tunnel will be seen. Happy Monday.
Date: 8/8/2021 2:23:00 PM
I agree my friend when we are groping in the dark without a light, in can be a very long wait. Pray that the light finds you every day of your life :)
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Date: 8/8/2021 3:26:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes I will pray for that. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 8/8/2021 1:24:00 PM
The only wandering in darkness is to may have a baby-boom. lol, thanks for sharing this poem, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2021 3:28:00 PM
Hello Tayeb ,yes that could happen. LOL. Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening .

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