No Comfort

it feels like she’s dead but memories don’t comfort salt in the wound For Susan’s senyru contest

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Robin Davis

Date: 3/12/2014 8:15:00 AM

Jack Short but so full of emotional hurt and sorrow. The pain of the memories is hauntingly displayed. Thanks for the great comment on my Two Little Poems write.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/11/2013 8:31:00 PM

Wonderful, Jack! Congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:49:00 AM

congratulations Jack, xox~ LINDA

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/8/2013 6:27:00 PM

A melancholy write, Jack. Congrats on your HM! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2013 8:34:00 AM

Love this Jack!Congrats on the win.

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 11:09:00 PM

Jack, this one I enjoyed, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

John Posey

Date: 11/7/2013 7:17:00 PM

Scramble the lines - Scatter the words - It still hurts - .... Congratulations.... Jake

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/7/2013 6:18:00 PM

Congrats. Good to see your work a winner. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2013 3:40:00 PM

Jack, yours is one that I really liked. Congrats for the HM.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2013 5:40:00 PM

wow, this could have been used as a double play!!! If you'd entitled it by its last line!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2013 2:03:00 PM

I feel this would be true with your ex wife, salt in the wound with the memories you have with her, I feel for you my friend, I can only remember back when I was young and had girlfriends that had broken up with me and the pain that I had then! That's all I have to go by and reference to understand your pain! This poem however expresses it very masterfully Jack! I loved reading this immaculate poem here this afternoon! What a glorious piece! Great Work!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2013 1:35:00 PM

Effectively expressed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2013 11:17:00 AM

wow.. wow... Sad, and kind of twisted.... Linda