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No Chameleon

The sun slowly rises charmed by A song the roosters sing The light mist of the fog surrounds Hill_creek most everything Whispy white clouds decorate sky The red_red sun peeks through Branches of forest's trees And cast purple on sky blue Nature swiftly changes each morn But sameness still surrounds Life can move slow or swift, relaxed Or stress your life dumbfound A colorful life isn't won Necessarily by The swift or the proud but by the Steady regular guy(or gal) Who in even temper plods the Path constant emotions Non-volatile explosion, soft Gentle non-chameleon

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Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 8/30/2012 7:34:00 AM

i like it sara :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/19/2012 11:59:00 AM

I'll buy into that Sara; good words my friend..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2012 9:01:00 AM

Yes, indeed - great message here, my friend.

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/18/2012 12:40:00 AM

I smiled when I read the first two lines, as they reminded me of growing up back home, what it was to get up in the morning to the roosters crowing...I just love the sounds they make. Nice write. About cancer...well it is sad that we at sometime or the other have to come face-to-face with this monster with someone we love. Take care and God bless. Joy Wells.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/17/2012 11:06:00 PM

This is awesome Sara...enjoy reading it :)))thanks for your sharing:) hug and luv, SK

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/17/2012 8:26:00 PM

Sarah, I like this poem hon. The message is great as is the flow. It has been awhile. I hope life is treating you well, mj

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/17/2012 6:42:00 PM

Nice write Sara. Just correct one little spelling error in the third line of your last verse. Just change "Non-volitle" to "Non-volatile".

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/17/2012 5:33:00 PM

I have a feeling those last two verses describe you, my friend!...Very nice write...was a pleasure to read this evening - Tim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/17/2012 4:19:00 PM

most lovely configuration of colors and imagery Sara.. a winning wonder of rare beauty luv.. best of luck..

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2012 3:30:00 PM

What a colorful blending for a write my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful and pleasant poem that you have written Sara! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!