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Nirvana Nuzzle

~Nirvana Nuzzle~ Here in the park's tranquility, We watch the birds and butterflies and bustling bees. You even made jasmine tea and brought fortune cookies. I break my cookie, it reads: "Someday, a poet, you shall be." I laugh and throw my back against the cool San Francisco grass. The smell of eucalyptus trees, swaying~ so ultimately intoxicating! This day with you~so enchanting. You are my eternal love. And I....your forevermore lass! July 27, 2019 3pm  PST

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Date: 8/22/2023 5:52:00 AM
A sweet romantic write set in lovely San Francisco. Very nice Pangie! :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/25/2023 11:13:00 AM
Linda, sorriest I did not see your comment till today! Thank you for taking time.stay cool! Pangie.
Date: 8/21/2023 8:37:00 AM
Another delightful and thought-provoking verse from your very prolific quill, Pangie! And your fortune cookie proved to be very prophetic since you have become the very talented poet that you are. Bob H
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2023 10:15:00 AM
What a charming comment that fully expresses your reaction. You know I loathe drive by comments, JUST empty words that expresse:…nothing, except “ I’m in a hurry! “I have stopped reading these poets they should use just use from one to five. Asterisks And usually will not sign their names… A great impersonal touch. Worse are one word ones! Thanks is not a comment byitself. It is rude, glas yo have the soulfulness to honor poets. Ange
Date: 8/21/2023 4:39:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I felt the passion in this poem. So very romantic. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx-ooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/21/2023 10:11:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Good afternoon. your welcome. Hugs. xxx /Darlene.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2023 5:09:00 AM
Good morning, Darlene! Wow!!You picked up on the two major themes in this poem..thank you, Hugs, Pangie xxx
Date: 8/21/2023 2:01:00 AM
You paint a magical scene with your words Pangie, Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/21/2023 5:06:00 AM
Tom, I appreciate your most astute words. Hope all is going well for you. Pangie Thank yo…Pangie
Date: 8/20/2023 9:24:00 PM
What a magical treat to enjoy. So musical and creative.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/20/2023 9:37:00 PM
Thanks, Elena. I so enjoyed your comment and my first few years here.!! I wrote better in the past, and even better relied on no images! ))))))) AMAZING! Pangie
Date: 8/20/2023 5:10:00 PM
This is really a nice nuzzle, Pangie. A bit of nirvana most welcome these days! Excelsior! :) Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/20/2023 5:46:00 PM
Nice of you to say..I go back here and there are tons of poems “never read,” it amazes me that I ever kept writing at all. But a great reminder of that if I depended on comments I would never be here. Opinions do not make a good poet. Anymore than voters make a good politician.I agree on your assessment.TY Pangie
Date: 7/28/2019 7:46:00 AM
The fortune cookie was an enormously imaginative touch that worked well in this missive, my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/28/2019 12:40:00 PM
Caren! How nice of you to say that. Panagiota xx
Date: 7/28/2019 7:22:00 AM
So delightful and romantic, Panagiota..nirvana!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/28/2019 12:39:00 PM
Indeed, it was.... Panagiota
Date: 7/28/2019 12:54:00 AM
This is very sweet. Hugs Rick.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/28/2019 1:05:00 AM
Thank you..Richard. It's a knockout as photo art. Better than plain script.)) Hugs, Panagiota

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