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Nirvana - Bawdy Contest

there was a young man from Havana
whose joystick was like a banana
every girl wants to feel
when they did it would squeal
kiss me quick we will reach Nirvana*


*state of blissful repose


Penned 5th May 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:22:00 AM

Seren,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2014 6:13:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/10/2014 12:07:00 PM

thank you Sarah, thank you ...Seren

Elaine George

Date: 6/9/2014 4:46:00 PM

Tooooo funny. Many congra'ts on your win, Seren. Elaine

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/10/2014 12:09:00 PM

thank you Elaine glad it brought a smile to your face ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2014 8:49:00 AM

I guess this really is monkey business. Congrats.

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2014 3:32:00 PM

Lol u think so. ...Seren

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 7:34:00 AM

Seren, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2014 3:34:00 PM

Thank you SKAT .....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2014 10:04:00 PM

Hey, seeing this one near the end of my comments on that winner list. I think this is another one that I'd like to see higher placed. It's pretty darn good!! Congrats on your win, Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2014 3:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea well I was placed so that's good.... Seren