Nine Seventeen, Pm

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For anyone who left comments on the original post of this poem, thank you and I apologize but I had to delete and re-post it.

Lying in bed, the light of my computer bright against the still images slowly changing on the silent TV across the room. Despoiling the image, nine seventeen, pm stands out on the bottom of the screen. My tired head resting from the day's turmoil, unthinking, unfocused. In front of me I find myself back on some poetry page. It appears to be a contest. Yeah, me writing poetry, much less entering a contest, what a joke. I reach over and slip my headphones on, “All I Ask of You,” from Phantom of the Opera is playing. The room is dark. The room is quiet. In the dimness on the wall in front of me I glimpse a surreal painting my daughter painted. The lower portion, that of a young woman, changing to trees and clouds and blue sky. No eyes to see. The images imagined in her mind. In the dimness the homemade gesso, creating Bas-relief against the canvas, is imagined in mine. The dark wooden frame stands stark against the rose grey wall, the matted canvas surrounded by white. Only sixteen and able to create such mystery, such allure. Ellen Greene, “Stop and See Me,” such sadness and longing in her voice. Her giclee print smiling at me to my right, she was eight, her older sister's, at age three, frames the large window. Strong and independent, she makes me so proud. She will likely be moving out soon. I don't want to think about that. “Run Away with Me,” Michael Arden, I lose myself in the music, “Evermore,” from Beauty and the Beast (the Josh Groben version). Loud and all encompassing, surrounding me in another world, letting free my emotions, calming my mood, “I Dreamed a Dream,” Ramin Karimloo, what's that sound? I remove my headphones. It's the dog. OK, Oliver, I'll take you out. I turn off the music. On the screen I see eleven forty-six, pm. So much work I've neglected for tomorrow.
07/07/2018

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Date: 8/4/2018 4:11:00 PM
Time goes by so quickly when one is engrossed in thought and music. One song leads to another...thoughts crop out of nowhere, intermingle. Neglected work?....who cares!! We only live once:) Regards // paul
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James Inman
Date: 8/4/2018 6:06:00 PM
Hi Paul, thanks for the visit and comment.
Date: 8/2/2018 7:01:00 PM
Music has a way of taking us away to a better place where we can ruminate our soul longings, I have enjoyed your poetry this evening, rather unique, great intake .
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James Inman
Date: 8/2/2018 9:20:00 PM
Thank you for visiting. I enjoy listening to music. Thanks for the nice comment.
Date: 8/2/2018 7:01:00 PM
Oh congrats too.
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Date: 8/1/2018 6:13:00 PM
Very nice! Congrats on the win!
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James Inman
Date: 8/1/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment Nancy.
Date: 7/29/2018 3:06:00 PM
wow, drifting in time and you let yourself end up almost at midnight. SO cool, Ralph!! I love when you write. I see no congrats but wasn't this one judged by Viv? I see he commented so I wonder why nobody has said congrats!! Love it, and if you won, CONGRATULATIOS. I'm going over to that contest right now to go see.
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Date: 7/29/2018 5:34:00 PM
This was the "nineseventeenPM" contest, hosted by John Lawless and yes it won first place, but I had to delete the original post because I added an image that slowed the page load down and caused it to be difficult to open. For some reason it would not let me delete the image. This is a re-post. Thanks for the visit and nice comment.
Date: 7/29/2018 3:02:00 PM
thanks for visiting me and seeing so many of my poems recently, my friend. So do you too believe in the Mandela Effects? Let me see this poem now. I think I saw all your others until now, but I'll check!
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James Inman
Date: 7/29/2018 6:06:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I wish I had time to read and write more. I left Disney awhile ago and since then I have no time for anything. Mandela Effect, hmmm, do I believe in it? Though I enjoyed your poem, most everything I've seen attributed to it can fairly easily be explained without otherworldly or time altering reasons. Let's just say I'm open minded with a strong imagination. (I always feel pretentious when I suggest one of my poems to someone, but have you read this one: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/-untitled- )
Date: 7/22/2018 1:37:00 AM
Excellent piece, love the rambling mood of it, James. regards, Viv
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James Inman
Date: 7/22/2018 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Viv.
Date: 7/21/2018 5:39:00 PM
What a musical, emotional, reminiscing poem. Many poets here couldn't even think of how to write for this contest and yet you've done it wonderfully James.
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James Inman
Date: 7/21/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thank you. Really, it was just me sharing a moment in my life.
Date: 7/21/2018 1:56:00 PM
James, your poem is just wonderful, I love the rambling feel of it just like our thoughts really are...
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James Inman
Date: 7/21/2018 2:25:00 PM
Hi BW, nice to hear from you. I was a bit surprised when I read yours and looked back at the winner's list and didn't see it there. I hope you're well. I had to delete my original post and re-post it.
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