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Nine Eleven ( Part 2 )

As only death can, From the body’s clay land, Death only releases, The true fleeces, Of the pieces, Of the clay! For mind over matter, Can only scatter, As seen in the latter, Natural matter, Of the 9-11 scatter! No chosen few, In 9-11's a-do, All are carnal mind’s inclusion, If you suffer under carnal mind’s illusion, It’s the world, In peril, The bad girl, Doing death’s reverse swirl! Come out of her, For this will re-occur, Time and time again, As death spins, Strife’s gin! For God did not do, This unto you, Is caused by your view, And carnal pursue! As a poet I must sow it, I am not oblivious to it, Love is my concern, But as a world we must turn, And learn, Untill then, death has it’s turn! One final word, and hope you’ve heard, The suffering of flesh, Also cuts a big gash, In my flesh, As teeth gnash! But there is a cover, The lover, Of mens Souls, The inward master, Love, From above. Must gov, With love!! 6-27-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 1/26/2012 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Great way to write about that most infamous day.
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:08:00 PM
Glad to see this one featured. congrats on the feature. Vince
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Date: 7/18/2009 10:14:00 AM
"The inward master, Love, from above, must gov, with love" I can see how you went for the rhyme by picking 'gov' but it still rang in my head as opposition to free will. like your choices poem, everyone chooses how to react to world tragedies. America didn't exactly react to this one in Any kind of loving fashion huh...that's why we cannot be forced to love, as love doesn't govern over us so much as gently reminds us how crazy we all are by choosing against it. where'd you learn all this John?
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Date: 7/13/2009 2:42:00 PM
Tremendous write John, its certainly a day i will never forget, i also wrote a poem called 9-11, awesome poem>>James
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Date: 7/8/2009 7:42:00 PM
I am convinced our government knew about 9-11 on 7-11. With 14 Saudis and a couple of others from Afghanistan involved, we used it as an excuse to go to war with Iraq. Hopefully someday leaders will use their ears as much as they do their mouths. Vince
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Date: 6/29/2009 10:26:00 PM
a wonderfully written piece about a true tragedy,,,but it must be remembered and not forgot everwe have heard of the tragedy of pearl harbor within a ever growing of new age we have somewhat forgotten that tragedy,,hopefully this will never be forgotten,,just like many things ,,things may be forgiven but they should not be forgotten,,and Thank you for your words that you left behind after visiting my words,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 6/27/2009 5:20:00 PM
it never goes away.......911.
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