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nighttime comes as the guardian of daylight-gives her time to rest, sleep

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Regina Elliott

Date: 10/27/2023 3:08:00 PM

Hi Sara, a serene nocturnal haiku. Hugs xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 5:10:00 PM

thanks, Regina, for your visit to my nocturnal creation. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2023 4:04:00 PM

Very sweet! I enjoy your gentle words, Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 4:43:00 PM

thanks for the visit, Kim, and for your kind comments. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2023 7:42:00 AM

Wish I could sleep soundly. I cannot. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 2:53:00 PM

I understand, Victor. I don't sleep soundly most nights either...one of the downsides of getting older but wiser. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/20/2023 6:34:00 AM

Dear Sara, you're such a gorgeous soul and I am always in awe of your eloquent and graceful wordsmithery, so unique always! "nighttime comes as the guardian of daylight-gives her time to rest" This creates a peaceful ambience for the reader, when healing spells revolve in the beautiful zephyr of the environment, blanketed by symphonies of the moon and twinkling stars.. This really swirled like a melody in my heart, wonderful haiku, dear lovely soul! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 2:55:00 PM

dearest Hiya--your words and kindness speak to my soul. I'm grateful for your compliments and for your thoughtful observations. I'd have to echo your words about your poetry. I'm in awe of your eloquent use of vocabulary and artistic creativity. In my heart I believe you're a creative genius...glad we've connected here at Poetry Soup. Have a gracious weekend, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2023 1:38:00 AM

Such a flawless haiku this is sara, as always, i must say, you definitely are the queen of haiku, it isnt just the way you paint imagery but also how theres an evocative touch in your words that really gets readers to feel so much through your lines articulated in few syllables! Another excellent one, i especially love “ guardian of daylight gives” “ her time to rest, sleep” how deep! Sending you lots of light always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 4:18:00 AM

thank you, Ink, for the crown you've so graciously given me. I'm grateful beyond words that you find my words have an evocative touch. You brought 'light' to my day. Wishing you a joy-filled day with creativity and hope. hugs from me to you, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2023 7:33:00 PM

Sara, your imagination is truly exceptional and your creation is absolutely charming! You perfectly conveyed a great scene with your well-picked lexicon.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 4:12:00 AM

thank you, dear Sotto, for seeing the charm and beauty in my Haiku. I took delight in your use of lexicon. It was the perfect word...you command of vocabulary is impressive. You use words artistically, even your comments. Enjoy your Friday, Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 10/19/2023 5:45:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, Sara, the imagery is powerful,"daylight-gives her time to rest." God bless you.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 4:10:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Eve. I'm grateful for your visit and your kind words. Have a splendid day, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 10/19/2023 4:54:00 PM

Lovely and the photo matches!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 5:13:00 PM

thanks, Karen, I appreciate your kind comments. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/19/2023 4:40:00 PM

LOVE the personification of time! Not sure i seen it in these terms before. Sweet! A most delightful imaginng! Hugs, sally

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 5:12:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Sally, and for your kind comments. I'm glad you found my poem delight. Have a pleasant evening and e-hugs for you too, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/19/2023 3:23:00 PM

I liked your Haiku very much dear lovely Sara! And so on: (daylight comes as the guardian of nighttime-gives his time to rest, sleep) Have a great time! ~AA

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:04:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Abdullah. I'm grateful you liked my Haiku. I appreciate your ongoing support, Sara enjoy the remainder of your day... :-)