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Nightscapes

Speckled night canvas, Chattering leaves serenade; Beauty never sleeps.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:00:00 AM

Nothing sleeps when the song is a tribute you do not want to miss ... another haiku that speaks to mastery

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/13/2009 8:57:00 PM

NOw this is a gorgeous poem, I can see the night so clearly. Excellent Title!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/13/2009 7:46:00 PM

Superb! Off to my favs. BG

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/13/2009 7:05:00 PM

I envision a hammock between the trees, with a soft whisper of wind constantly blowing, rustling the leaves gently rocking them in time.You, looking at the midnight sky, and find out the constellations have been throwing little night lights across for your amazement.-AA

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/13/2009 2:48:00 PM

nice.

Tyler Martin

Date: 5/13/2009 12:47:00 PM

Speckled night canvas, superb analogy of a lovley night sky. Beautiful work, Raul. Tyler

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2009 12:41:00 PM

Oh yes....this is beautiful. Can hear the barely audible rustling of leaves...see the stars...so lovely!! Love this! ~ Carrie

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/13/2009 12:37:00 PM

Beautiful! Keep on writting Master. - jeremiah

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/13/2009 6:54:00 AM

Wow! I am with Stacey! That very last line makes the others even more! Awesome work! Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2009 10:32:00 PM

Your poetry is one of the reasons "Beauty never sleeps," Raul. It is wide awake, springing to life from your gifted pen. We bow again to the haiku master! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 5/12/2009 10:27:00 PM

I feel the breeze gently whisper through the trees with this lovely piece, Raul! It is beautiful, indeed! ~ Donna