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Nightscapes

Speckled night canvas, Chattering leaves serenade; Beauty never sleeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/21/2009 8:00:00 AM
Nothing sleeps when the song is a tribute you do not want to miss ... another haiku that speaks to mastery
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Date: 5/13/2009 8:57:00 PM
NOw this is a gorgeous poem, I can see the night so clearly. Excellent Title!
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Date: 5/13/2009 7:46:00 PM
Superb! Off to my favs. BG
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Date: 5/13/2009 7:05:00 PM
I envision a hammock between the trees, with a soft whisper of wind constantly blowing, rustling the leaves gently rocking them in time.You, looking at the midnight sky, and find out the constellations have been throwing little night lights across for your amazement.-AA
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Date: 5/13/2009 2:48:00 PM
nice.
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:47:00 PM
Speckled night canvas, superb analogy of a lovley night sky. Beautiful work, Raul. Tyler
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:41:00 PM
Oh yes....this is beautiful. Can hear the barely audible rustling of leaves...see the stars...so lovely!! Love this! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful! Keep on writting Master. - jeremiah
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:54:00 AM
Wow! I am with Stacey! That very last line makes the others even more! Awesome work! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/12/2009 10:32:00 PM
Your poetry is one of the reasons "Beauty never sleeps," Raul. It is wide awake, springing to life from your gifted pen. We bow again to the haiku master! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2009 10:27:00 PM
I feel the breeze gently whisper through the trees with this lovely piece, Raul! It is beautiful, indeed! ~ Donna
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