Nightscapes

Speckled night canvas,
Chattering leaves serenade;
Beauty never sleeps.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:00 AM
Nothing sleeps when the song is a tribute you do not want to miss ... another haiku that speaks to mastery
Bird Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 8:57 PM
NOw this is a gorgeous poem, I can see the night so clearly. Excellent Title!
Gorelick Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Superb! Off to my favs. BG
Hudson Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 7:05 PM
I envision a hammock between the trees, with a soft whisper of wind constantly blowing, rustling the leaves gently rocking them in time.You, looking at the midnight sky, and find out the constellations have been throwing little night lights across for your amazement.-AA
Neshat Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 2:48 PM
nice.
Martin Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Speckled night canvas, superb analogy of a lovley night sky. Beautiful work, Raul. Tyler
Richards Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 12:41 PM
Oh yes....this is beautiful. Can hear the barely audible rustling of leaves...see the stars...so lovely!! Love this! ~ Carrie
Orozco Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Beautiful! Keep on writting Master. - jeremiah
Winter Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Wow! I am with Stacey! That very last line makes the others even more! Awesome work! Love, Shar
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 10:32 PM
Your poetry is one of the reasons "Beauty never sleeps," Raul. It is wide awake, springing to life from your gifted pen. We bow again to the haiku master! Love, Carolyn
Golden Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 10:27 PM
I feel the breeze gently whisper through the trees with this lovely piece, Raul! It is beautiful, indeed! ~ Donna
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