Get Your Premium Membership

Nights' Enchantress

Through a canopy of leaves
ascending , 
Night a visage of rippling ebony 
her tears falling like raindrops 
bedazzling the dark 
Her arm a windlass 
spiraling coils of silken mist
rolling , heaving , becoming as ether 
Sweeping specks of light in her wake


Chevaliers her dark companions
Lurking nocturnally 
darkness their mask  
A Grotesque masquerade
beauty at its bleakest 
blood soaked rags their Armour 
her sentinels forever watchful


Moon mirror to darkness
revealing nights face
Past images ,
forgotten horrors and vast beauty 
her muniment of time
Tributaries of tears lining a face
bereft of life
She moves as slow water
Her velvet veils
held aloft by dancing night imps


Night’s appetite 
An unsated desire 
for shadow and shade 
these are her feast 
Quenching her thirst 
greyness her fine wine


Goddess,
Drunk on her own spirit 
Lulls and wanes


But night goes on 
moon chimes time 
Darkness must regather
her chevalier’s ! her night imps !
She never rests
her hunger never sated


As she is night silently she moves on
Forever divergent from light
Embracing and becoming darkness
Goddess of night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/14/2009 10:04:00 AM
Super imagery in this write Jayne>>James
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2009 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. Ernilando
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2009 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jayne. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/15/2009 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations Jayne on "Nights' Enchantress" being featured. Vince
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2009 10:40:00 PM
Jayne - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2009 7:14:00 AM
Unmistakably pure genius, I am wordless and feels untaught before the beauty of your thought ... praises again.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2009 8:51:00 PM
Joseph this is one of my favourites I am night person and wanted to bring the night to people in a way that creates some mystery/beauty .. love Jayne
Login to Reply
Date: 5/18/2009 1:30:00 PM
Hello Jayne, this poem flows very well. I like the variety of images and the way they come across. The theme is consistent also. Great job! ~Joseph
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry