Nighthawks

Inspired by the painting 'Nighthawks' by Edward Hopper The air changes when the majority sleep As does the energy out in the street Aura's of wakeful others draw you near Pondering their character beneath the veneer Soulful quietude emitted from people and faces Vast emptiness contrasting shadowy places A tale of weariness transcribed on their skin But shared nighthawk energy and feeling of kin Premier Choice No 1188 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand 2nd place

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Gary Radice

Date: 3/5/2023 4:21:00 AM

Love it D D! You pick up on the atmosphere and loneliness very well. I like how you describe the way the painting draws you in. One thing: should: "Soulful quietude emitted from people and places read "Soulful quietude emitted from people and FACES?? Feel free to ignore me if this isn't the case. Cheers - Gary

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/5/2023 4:36:00 AM

You are right! Can't believe I missed that. Thank you :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/2/2023 5:01:00 PM

Dear Dilly, the vivid atmospheric imagery of your expressive poem dovetails beautifully with the stark scene in Edward Hopper’s painting Nighthawks. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/2/2023 11:04:00 PM

Many thanks Susan, I'm enjoying how discovering poetry is holding my hand to discover other art forms too :)