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Restless sleep triggers delusional dreams, that your beleaguered brain surrenders to. And from night terrors, you awake to screams for it feels so real; you think it's true that spectral shadows are pursuing you; and powerless, there's nothing you can do. Though safe in bed, you feel you're in peril, unable to dispel feelings of dread. It's like finding your dog has gone feral, and you're not sure if it's alive or dead; while it chases you, growling, to be fed, your feet tangled in the sheets of your bed. Anxiety rises, reaching its peak, while your heart mercilessly pounds your chest. You feel disorientated and weak; imprisoned in a nightmare you detest, unable to wake, though you try your best; panic, ensuring that you'll get no rest. Scary night terrors often make you cry, for you genuinely think you will die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/17/2018 11:22:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/30/2018 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Emile! That is such a nice gift to give as a prize. I love my copies. Thank you again! : )
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Date: 1/30/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I always look forward to your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/27/2018 7:47:00 PM
I felt my spine tingle with your intense imagery Emile. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/26/2018 10:42:00 AM
Spot-on description of a nightmare, Emile. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 1/26/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2018 10:33:00 PM
Very good, Emile. You have portrayed the essence of a nightmare perfectly IMO. :) GL in the contest.
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Date: 1/26/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2018 4:11:00 PM
Well descriptive poem for this contest Emile. :)
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Date: 1/24/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I hope you enter my contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2018 3:46:00 PM
Boy can I relate to this poem. Your scary imagery is expressed so well in this chilling piece Emile! I lie awake, afraid to try to go back to sleep. I hope this is a top pick Emile! : ) P.S. I look forward to entering your Valentine's Contest.
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Date: 1/24/2018 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Connie, as always your comments are much appreciated my friend. Should you or Andrea win first place you may choose someone to receive a copy of my book if you like, insomuch as you both already have a copy. I will be holding more of these contest to distribute my books around. Emile.

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