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Night Street

The dank petrichor of grainy night, meters stand like gravestones, the obsidian avenue slick as a sapphire, windowed granite rising in sharp cut shadows, wind gusting, tumbleweed clouds somersaulting in a moonless ghost town. I jingle keys with atonal sky and listen to my footsteps on concrete ticking like a clock. There are places to be. I hasten my step as rain drops resume, one by one mounting into a riotous crowd. Umbrella-less, I am soon sopping, hair a wet carpet, suit a gray saturated tarp, the briefcase and tote onyx boulders. My car is still a block away, but eventually I reach it like a leaf washing down stream. The tote slips off my shoulder as I stoop to retrieve fallen keys lying in a shallow puddle like a shattered talisman. Suddenly I begin laughing, dropping everything in the street, my face skyward, arms splayed like a crucifix. Now there is no tomorrow, only the farce of my predicament, standing like a drowned coyote howling at the moon as though it would be there forever.

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Date: 1/10/2019 6:16:00 PM
I just love your writing so much , Dale. Another fave. Can't believe I ever missed this one.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/10/2019 6:28:00 PM
Thanks very much, Andrea.
Date: 10/12/2018 11:04:00 PM
This is a great write Dale. I don't know what all the words mean, but I felt it and imagined dropping the keys and the whole bit. Well done as always! Oh, and a FAV for me as well!.......pat
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/13/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks very much, Pat!
Date: 9/30/2018 5:49:00 PM
Love: tumbleweed clouds somersaulting and yes, I’d laugh...sounds like a wild and crazy day!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/30/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Kim.
Date: 9/23/2018 11:38:00 PM
A wonderful read. Congrats on your well deserved silver medal win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/24/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 9/23/2018 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, Dale, great imagery. ...Eve
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/23/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 9/22/2018 9:56:00 PM
I recognized my own variation of surrender as I read your exquisite poem, Dale. With your superb imagery, I walked in your shoes down 'night street'. Congratulations on your excellent win. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/23/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Date: 9/22/2018 12:33:00 PM
This is SUPERB! CONGRATS, Dale!! Janice
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/22/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 9/22/2018 12:08:00 PM
You have a good ear for the sounds a poem can 'make'-- which works well with the strong sense of place the poem evokes-- congrats on your win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/22/2018 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, LJ.
Date: 9/22/2018 11:54:00 AM
Way to seize a moment and invite us all to don some rain gear and walk with you. Loved this stroll into acquiescence and peaceful surrender. Thank you for participating in the contest
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/22/2018 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, John.
Date: 9/20/2018 6:37:00 PM
Excellent work here, Dale. Great imagery; I am right there with you.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/20/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thanks much, ML.
Date: 9/14/2018 8:53:00 AM
Nature surely has a way of pulling us in, Dale:)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/14/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Jo.
Date: 9/12/2018 4:31:00 PM
Yeah, yeah, yeah give me more Dale love this free style imagery filled story line, all can relate I'm sure, funny how nature always wins...in the end!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/13/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Date: 9/12/2018 1:08:00 PM
Love the ending to this my friend. Into everyone's life a little rain must fall...might as well make the best of it when it comes. Nicely done.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/12/2018 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris. Good to hear from you!

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