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Night Storm

A storm on the edge of sleep, a night horse, black fire blown through wind-hollowed lungs. A tempest in the ringing shell of self where sleep slopes, swells, rolls phantom eyes in a drowning place. The mind has miles --- a long foreshadowing. a storm-child driven to an edge where his sleepy legs dangle over a pitched and plunging bed.

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Date: 3/20/2022 4:30:00 PM
Wonderful imagery…..best description of restless sleep …. a night horse…..rolls phantom eyes in a drowning place. Best, SuZ
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Eric Ashford
Date: 5/3/2022 8:13:00 AM
Much appreciate the close-read Suz.

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