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Night Starts

NIGHT STARTS Night starts as the clock strikes nine for all dreamy hearts, and he dressed in black announces darkness with a trumpet nobody played for lovers awaiting surprises; misty sky, hiding the pretty stars, make each cloud disappear and let dreamers still sigh! Entered in Nette onclaud's contest, " Just Nine Lines " Pic: # 2 Written by Andrew Crisci on 9/ 8/ 2013

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/10/2013 11:51:00 PM

oh geee, this is so beautiful, andrew .. though it somehow missed the basics of a rictameter, i just had to cite your piece.. congrats and check my blog as i spoke about it..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2013 3:20:00 PM

This is gorgeous, but I want to tell you something you can try to change as quickly as possible. Your rictameter has to both begin and end with the same two syllable line. I had to quickly redo mine when I put it up last night because I saw that rule at the last moment.