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male night shoes talk man talk daring to be stepped on yet soft, passionate like blue music patent leather, suede whispers New York sliders date night daddies nearing 500 bucks purchased to impress and say, “I am prized” lady night shoes murder the feet and other feet weapon sharp heels definitive sound of going somewhere sure straps, buckles and clear plastic studded sadistic pumps prom queen duos that in their loveliness ache sex on soles with leather warnings that say “See my night shoes. Dangerous” 5/12/19 Night Shoes Sponsored by Anthony Slausin 3rd Place YOUR CHOICE(4),any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand

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Date: 5/26/2019 3:24:00 PM
what a cool poem, Great idea to contrast the shoes of men and women. Yep, I would NOT want to be met by a woman's shoe in my face late at night! Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/30/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. I am always honored by your particular appreciation. Blessings, Janis
Date: 5/25/2019 7:21:00 PM
Wow! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jan! Janice
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/30/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thanks and blessings, Janis.
Date: 5/25/2019 6:14:00 PM
Janis, your male and lady shoes came alive with varied personalities within your clever, well-written poem! Love it! Congrats on your podium placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/30/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I am always highly appreciative of your comments. You are a top winner on this site. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 5/25/2019 6:05:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/30/2019 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Line. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 5/12/2019 9:51:00 PM
I love it. A winner for me :))) My best to you in the contest, xomo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/30/2019 4:26:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes Maureen. Ended up well. My best back at you.

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