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Night Out

I'd love to write something wonderful before going to sleep I'm all wrapped up thinking about going out on Saturday - I probably have the most wonderful times imagining in advance I've stalled at the moment, I'm thinking burrito, stout in a rock bar but then there's no live music I fancy... So I'm imagining being annoyed and ruining the night out with indecision. I'm currently annoyed with myself (in advance) What shall I wear? I do have that Hell Bunny bleeding roses dress... I need to force myself to not wear winter boots with it (they are comfy) It's weird imagining all the versions of me that have gone to that bar Like a montage from a film

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Date: 5/18/2023 10:30:00 PM
Sums up perfectly how the mind projects pleasure and pain into the future, undermining the moment with baggage. A very interesting insight DD....excellent.
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Date: 5/18/2023 10:40:00 PM
Aww thanks, I've struggled with stifling awareness today. Tried to write about it though

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