Night of Flickering Gold

Someone once called it  'too much of a chore'
But it's no good to say..."We aren't doing it this year"....
No matter the weather, be it rain, fog or snow,
   they will appear.  It's a fact.  .. (That we know!)

This is the season when loved ones come to their doors
look from their windows, out into the cold
Lights to behold, from those little brown sacks
Some might say "tacky"....but we see the gold

They could turn eyes away....but, they wiggle outside...
They will take away memories, good friendship, good tides

They might land on our doorstep, red noses like ice, 
wool scarves, gloves and eyes filled with happy surprise

We have earned our reward, with the work we have done....
Brown bags filled of candles, some sand and some love..

Then a walk in the dark, as we circle the road, 
Half a mile in the country, we will light up the dark 
Little bags, little candles, just some sand and a spark

It is no use...to say "We aren't doing it this year"....
Those words would be useless, deaf ears wouldn't hear..
They would beg us, convince us, and we will take every bribe
Nor is there one valid reason to bolt our front door...
They are welcome inside, all the neighbors, adored

The winter days shorten, and the are nights so long
When lights have been strung, and candles are burning
Where the fire is warming ...they will come here in throngs..

Neighbors and friends have come to our door
For the very same reason that we need them to come
Stomping their feet, and lending a hand....
Making us laugh, and bringing a friend

We will sing with them, share our food, show them our love
And when we bid them farewell, we will step outside into cold night
 And meet the wind, and smile...
We'll stand again beneath the stars for awhile....
Just he and I, holding hands... will walk the circle mile....
And watch the gold flicker in the cold December sky
And know the spirit of love and gratitude
Knowing this tradition, always knowing why...
Our Christmas gift to them...
And to ourselves....

Yes... of course, like always,...
               we'll be doing it this year...
 






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Date: 12/7/2009 7:25:00 AM
This is a beautiful tradition, dear Carrie! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest! One of the best I read! Peace and love, Audrey - Here's wishing you a very Merry Christmas to you and yours!
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:44:00 PM
Lovely Christmas poem Carrie, i just love this time of the year. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:17:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Carolyn's contest Carrie.rgds Brian
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:45:00 PM
What a lovely, loving poem. It shows the true Christmas Spirit. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:08:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:21:00 AM
Can i come at your door dear Carrie,it sounds magical:)beautiful--Charma
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Date: 10/17/2009 9:10:00 AM
gather them all inside keep them warm, celebrate pride. gather them all in your heart, give them a family that will not part.
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:54:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie and thank you for your ongoing encouragements.rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:20:00 PM
Sounds like the good life, Love in action, that is. I love this Christmas cheer, is near again this year. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:14:00 PM
You've put me in the Christmas spirit and it's only October!! Wonderfully done, Carrie! Can I come? (ha!) I'll lie and pretend to be a new neighbor! Also thanks for your comments on "Invasion"...I posted my own comment on YOUR comment if you'd like to re-read...God's blessings, my friend...Tim
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Date: 10/16/2009 10:14:00 AM
Beautiful inspirationn, Carrie! This is so warming as your words take us into the heart of your wonderful traditions! Best of luck in Carolyns contest with this lovely poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:33:00 AM
This really strikes nostalgia territory. Great write! Love, daver
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Date: 10/15/2009 11:45:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words todayCarrie Rgds Brian.
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:00:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Carolyn's contest Carrie with this lovely write. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:08:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Thank you for your welcome comments to day.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/14/2009 6:05:00 PM
sounds wonderful, our family gets together and that is about it.
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Date: 10/14/2009 3:50:00 PM
Very nice, Carrie. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/14/2009 2:35:00 PM
Nice tradition. Keep writing. Sara
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