Night Kiss

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Example for my contest. (8x8x8x8)

A dark blue sky before the night 
May set the mood to be just right 
To us, my dear, I think might be 
Due time for love, just you and me 
While we walk along, you and I 
I'll hold your hand beneath the sky 
When all the stars blink white above 
Then both our lips should touch, my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/17/2025 9:56:00 AM
This is so sweet, love a nice romantic poem.
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:23:00 PM
Flowing nicely, and romance enticing. Still not sure about the ....Both first word and last...rule looks hard, you make it look EASY! Valentine's kisses- spirited. ~Anaya
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Date: 2/9/2025 7:43:00 AM
Ohhh! I see now... was struggling with rules till I read this example. This is a poem that flows really well! I'm excited to try it, thanks! Xo
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:33:00 PM
LOVE your sweet, romantic poem ... oh, how it flows with love's feel. Also, I am excited by the challenge your contest presents, it will be so much fun to try and, hopefully, conquer. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/7/2025 5:25:00 AM
This is so lovely. A beautiful example, deeply romantic. Well done Charlie.
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Date: 2/5/2025 6:06:00 AM
Nice pattern. Sure to try. Best wishes.
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Date: 2/3/2025 6:28:00 PM
I left you a new soupmmail. Love poems like this pangie xx
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Date: 2/3/2025 9:22:00 AM
Love the romance created in your poem. Great challenge for the contest.
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Date: 2/3/2025 5:04:00 AM
Hello Charles, your poem is pure romance, simple, tender, and full of warmth. I love the gentle flow and the way the night sky sets the perfect stage for love. Beautifully heartfelt and timeless! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/2/2025 3:52:00 PM
What a cool challenge idea, Charles. Thanks for your example I really like it!
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Date: 2/2/2025 3:21:00 PM
Awww what a lovely poem full of romance and love Charlie! Debx
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