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Night Hawker

One lonely, chilly night, I awoke to faintly hear a rap, rap, rap coming from my front door knocker. Too curious to ignore, I opened it a crack, and there stood a man, tall and wan, a strange night hawker. He wavered as he stood, askew, as quietly he talked of cemetery plots for sale, not far away, brand new. With deadpan face and wandering eye, gazed off with parched cracked lips, he spoke as spittle spewed. A violent, bloody cough exposed his ills, he swayed came forward to steady himself, then reached to touch my arm he grabbed and clutched, I struggled away then gasped, his foul breath reeked, it was all too much. Suddenly his frail frame crumpled before my very eyes he writhed and from his mouth sprang leeches from inside that attached to me and sucked upon my blood until I died. Written on 9/23/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/16/2020 10:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your scary and well written Halloween poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/16/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise! :)
Date: 10/15/2020 8:09:00 PM
So eerie. CONGRATS on your win, Laura! Janice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/16/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Date: 10/15/2020 11:57:00 AM
Laura, this is really creepy. I love it! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/15/2020 12:18:00 PM
Thanks so much for liking my creepy story that I penned several years ago!
Date: 10/15/2020 10:34:00 AM
A scary poem, Laura, and I could just imagine the leeches sucking blood in the end. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/15/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thanks so much for my placement in your contest, Carolyn! I’m so excited you like this creepy story! :)
Date: 11/9/2015 1:57:00 PM
creepy write -but I love the humour too Laura congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2015 11:15:00 AM
Laura, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Skat :)
Date: 10/16/2015 10:32:00 PM
A chilling and creepy story, indeed!... I really enjoyed this dark write, Laura. Very nicely penned... Good luck in the contest!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/17/2015 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Kelly, for your kind comments! I'm really glad you enjoyed my creepy story! Gotta get into the mood for Halloween, right?! ;)
Date: 10/15/2015 9:58:00 AM
A GREAT ENTRY MY FRIEND. Love the ending especially.. A7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/15/2015 2:40:00 PM
Why, thank you, dear Robert! It's my macabre side coming out....BOO!
Date: 10/12/2015 8:13:00 AM
Creepy and funny. Certainly cheeped me out.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/15/2015 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, James. With Halloween around the corner, I get into that macabre mood, if you know what I mean ;)

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