Night Hawker

One lonely, chilly night, I awoke to faintly hear 
a rap, rap, rap coming from my front door knocker.
Too curious to ignore, I opened it a crack, and there 
stood a man, tall and wan, a strange night hawker.  

He wavered as he stood, askew, as quietly he talked
of cemetery plots for sale, not far away, brand new.
With deadpan face and wandering eye, gazed off
with parched cracked lips, he spoke as spittle spewed.

A violent, bloody cough exposed his ills, he swayed
came forward to steady himself, then reached to touch
my arm he grabbed and clutched, I struggled away 
then gasped, his foul breath reeked, it was all too much.

Suddenly his frail frame crumpled before my very eyes
he writhed and from his mouth sprang leeches from inside
that attached to me and sucked upon my blood until I died.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 10:59 AM
- Congratulations on your scary and well written Halloween poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise! :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 8:09 PM
So eerie. CONGRATS on your win, Laura! Janice
Leiser Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:57 AM
Laura, this is really creepy. I love it! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Thanks so much for liking my creepy story that I penned several years ago!
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 10:34 AM
A scary poem, Laura, and I could just imagine the leeches sucking blood in the end. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 12:17 PM
Thanks so much for my placement in your contest, Carolyn! I’m so excited you like this creepy story! :)
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 1:57 PM
creepy write -but I love the humour too Laura congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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November 9, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Laura, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
Leiser Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Skat :)
Deschler Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 10:32 PM
A chilling and creepy story, indeed!... I really enjoyed this dark write, Laura. Very nicely penned... Good luck in the contest!
Leiser Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Kelly, for your kind comments! I'm really glad you enjoyed my creepy story! Gotta get into the mood for Halloween, right?! ;)
Lindley Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:58 AM
A GREAT ENTRY MY FRIEND. Love the ending especially.. A7
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Why, thank you, dear Robert! It's my macabre side coming out....BOO!
Inman Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Creepy and funny. Certainly cheeped me out.
Leiser Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, James. With Halloween around the corner, I get into that macabre mood, if you know what I mean ;)
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