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What The World loves, Nette Onclaud, 6/27/2025

soft, dark winds go round and round, passionate; firmly binds pairing lips on carousel. hearts flit up and down.

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Date: 7/6/2025 12:17:00 PM
Excitement and passion from within them their hearts and souls on fire, and being at a fun fair on the carousel, excitement mounting with speed and swirl, other lovers also kissing on the carousel, brings out an even more passionate kiss, they are at a fun fair which young couples tend to seek out. Congrats on your win Kim, Blessings and love Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2025 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs
Date: 7/3/2025 9:18:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Kim. Congrats on your win! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:12:00 PM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 6/30/2025 3:10:00 PM
Romance is indeed a carousel! Roller coaster! Dunking pound.... Love it! Blame it all on the clowns! And poetry:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:12:00 PM
Blame it all on the clowns…lol
Date: 6/29/2025 12:22:00 PM
such a romantic one. Congrats, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/29/2025 11:52:00 AM
Eloquent wording and sharp thinking definitely created this beautiful win of yours, congratulations Kim. Passion flows round and round on the carousel As 'HEARTS FLIT UP AND DOWN'. Great WRITE. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:13:00 PM
Thank you so much! <3
Date: 6/29/2025 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful "Night at the Carnival" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:13:00 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Date: 6/29/2025 6:38:00 AM
All so right! Beautiful! Xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:13:00 PM
Thanks, Crystol!
Date: 6/29/2025 1:21:00 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations to you on your win with this superb work Howard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:14:00 PM
Thanks, Howard!
Date: 6/28/2025 9:05:00 PM
'Hearts flip up and down.' The carousel, a metaphor/symbol for the passions of our lives. Brilliantly executed, Kim. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Date: 6/28/2025 7:53:00 PM
Passionate! Congrats on YOUR win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 6/28/2025 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic! I love this and enjoyed immensely. Thanks a lot for sharing my dear poet friend Kim. Big Congrats on your win! Hugs and cheers! God bless you always with your poetry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:15:00 PM
Thank youkindly, Len!
Date: 6/28/2025 9:20:00 AM
Beyond breathtaking, Kim. I agree with someone's comment here. You do have a "lovely subtlety" in your voice. Never tire of it - <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:15:00 PM
Iappreciate you, always!
Date: 6/28/2025 4:08:00 AM
Lovely! Long time since I have been on carousel. "Hearts flirt up and down" -- Beautiful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 6/28/2025 12:23:00 AM
Kim, Best of luck in the contest with this haunting and very astute work. You deserve it Howard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:16:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 6/27/2025 8:01:00 PM
"Soft, dark winds" is such a subtle but beautifully unique line. You have a lovely subtlety to your voice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2025 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, Beej!
Date: 6/27/2025 1:57:00 PM
Lovely imaginary, brings memories alive. Well written Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2025 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Tahiri!
Date: 6/27/2025 10:45:00 AM
Awwn what an enticing and alluring poem this is, dear Kim! Filled with lively and passionate sparks of the carnival that can light up the hearts of many! Love how descriptive you are, conveying the whole imagery with brilliant storytelling skills ~ the entire scene came to life with your clever use of words. Enjoyed reading this one, brilliantly done for the contest, sending best wishes and light always!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2025 11:06:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!

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