Night After Night

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I see Luna chasing Sol across the night sky separated by light and dark, and I feel Her pain as She tries in vain to achieve the impossible, over and over again, night after night, perpetually.

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 1/27/2024 10:04:00 AM

What a fun, relatable, and brilliant piece!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thanks, Robert, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 4:18:00 AM

Dear Emile, i always love a moon poem and this right here is a poem worth all the accolades, it the eloquent flow of your word weaving and how ethereal it is that makes this stand out for me, as well as the evocative depth of some of your lines such as “ and I feel Her pain as She tries in vain“ so soulful, and touching the way youv written that, hits strong. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved, thank you for sharing this

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2024 7:46:00 AM

Thanks, Ink Empress, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 1/20/2024 7:12:00 AM

I love your take on this contest Emile.. love the last two lines.. All the best dear friend..

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/20/2024 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Silent One, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Lin Lane

Date: 1/19/2024 1:29:00 PM

I've always felt their need to be lovers, Emile. Impossible? Yes, nonetheless I saw it as if he were chasing her. Your accompanying picture tells their story almost well as your Fibonacci. Excellent writing.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/20/2024 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Lin, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.