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Night After Christmas

WE WERE BT THE TREE WE COULD SEE THERE WERE GIFTS FOR STIFF LIKE ME IT WAS HEAVENLY ON CHRISTMAS DAY THERE WAS TO MUST STUFF SO WE OPEN BY BLINKING LIGHTS THE NIGHT AFTER CHRISTMAS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/23/2011 10:50:00 PM
I really like your sentiments! Perhaps though you should do a spell check? I normally don't care, as my own spelling is abysmal and rarely am interested in correcting it. However, there were some words that were a bit confusing in this one, and that does make it harder to derrive the meaning from your piece.
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