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Night Visitors

The midnight hour is upon me and the moon and stars are shining so bright. As I awakened I arose and looked out my window. Below dancing on my lawn were a dozen or so fairies. I watched them as their wings began to flitter and their legs came off the ground. Up to my window they flew, oh so beautiful each and everyone of them were. They ask if I would like to come out and visit with them. I answered oh yes please I will be right out. They told me to hold on I could fly down with them. I have no wings I can not fly I said. Oh yes you can just close your eyes and come along with us. I did as they said and the next thing I knew I was flying through the sky along with them. We flew down upon the lawn and for a long while we sang and we danced with such delight. Then they told me I must return to my bed for I needed my rest. So again I was told to close my eyes and come along with them. And once again the next thing I knew I was back in my room. They promised to come again another night and we would sing and dance together once more. I told my mother the next morning and she said my dear you had a visit from the fairyland night visitors what a wonderful time I know you had. You see she said they visited me also when I was about your age and visited for years. I am so happy to know I will again be visited by my fairyland night visitors. "All I have to do is look into my shining ball of make believe" Entry: Land of Fairies Sponsor: Leighann Anderson 2nd Place Winner Entered in P.D.'s 2nd Place winners only contest 3rd Place Winner

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Date: 4/8/2012 8:15:00 AM
Lovely read and congrats to your deserved place in the contest...Patrick
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:40:00 AM
congrats Carol on being a featured poet this week on PS.. another lovely write to share with luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 11:46:00 AM
Thank you all. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this sweet, whimsical poem, Carol. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on this creative work being in the winners' circle..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:17:00 AM
CAROL... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:07:00 AM
Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:50:00 PM
I knew this wa a winner so lovely to see you write a long verse. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love!
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Carol my dear friend. Luv Michael
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:21:00 PM
congrats Carol on another wonderful write and win .. mesmerizing lines of poetic art contained in this piece .. superbly crafted and told ..luv..
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:55:00 AM
Ah yes them fairy's hey, gets you thinking, where are they, tonight...
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Date: 10/24/2011 2:29:00 PM
Enjoyed this flight of fancy Carol, and thank you for your good words..
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Date: 10/11/2011 7:52:00 PM
Very nice though of, and put together. And your imagery was perfect!
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Date: 10/11/2011 5:01:00 PM
faerie land dreaming, the sweetest in spring, when summer has gone to the west, a riding on golden leave carpets yes, i'm thinking, when fall has leaves flying the best ... thank you S C Brown....
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Date: 10/6/2011 10:54:00 AM
ahh awww I bet you have fun telling this fine tale to children do you have grand kids yet I don't? Light & Love
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Date: 8/27/2011 9:32:00 AM
In my dreams I am constantly in flight. But is it a dream? Lovely expression of where we go in that other world. Jim
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:57:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Could See Those Precious Little Fairies Running Along The Pacifics Shoreline Aneath The Harvest's Autumn Moon My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Carol Brown! = They Were Giggling As Their Tiny Wings Left Glittering Trails As Sparkling Stardust Amid Their Moonbeam Wakes *^_^* As I Too, Became Enchanted With Their Gaze As They Sang, Come Sail Away With Me * Sooo Sweeet My Dear &, Thank You, for The Kind Lovely Visit!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:36:00 AM
Sweet congratulation for win with best wishes. bl
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:57:00 AM
Big congratulations on your great win in Leighann's contest, Carol. Bravo! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2011 7:08:00 AM
A pleasant and entertaining read, glad I dropped by
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:03:00 PM
Carol, congratulations on your win in Land of Faries contest. Enjoyed reading your story. ~Glenna
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Date: 8/16/2011 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations Carol on your 2nd place win with this wonderful tale. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 8/16/2011 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations Carol, on your win in the contest, your poem is breathtaking and thanks for your ever comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:51:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Carol : )
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Date: 8/16/2011 7:41:00 AM
Thank you all for the comments and congrats. Congrats to all the winners and thank you Leighann for sponsoring this contest. I am very happy you enjoyed my story. Love, Carol
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