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Night

N.  
             
                    NIGHT 
                   RaviNG
              Calm solace 

     Sweet talks, soothing walks
    My soul yearns for that Gaze
   That    tea     in    the   Balcony 

Moon awaits the starry embrace! 





form: Clarity Pyramid. 


Symbolically & Metaphorically the speaker talks about a beloved, in whose calm, and wild company, the speaker finds peace. Speaker is yearning to have those moments and awaits the beloved's loving embrace. 


~Paghunda Zahid (1-07-2022)

Copyright © Paghunda Zahid | Year Posted 2022

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Catherine J. Broussard Date: 8/19/2022 11:26:00 AM I feel your poem, thank you my friend! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/22/2022 5:53:00 AM Is this true, if so I'm very happy for you sweet Paghunda. You haven't heard from me in a while, but don't ever please think that I could ever forget you - your charming nature, your poetic talent, your kind and gentle comments paint a holistic picture for me of a young friend I would love to meet. Great write, hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 5/23/2022 11:18:00 AM You are really sweet and kind Jennifer. Thank you. Stay blessed and happy

Susan Ashley Date: 5/11/2022 9:09:00 AM Oh this is so beautiful, Paghunda. I adore the opposition of solace and yearning - such a passion felt, such a passion ready for release. Exquisite, my friend, especially the last line! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 5/23/2022 11:16:00 AM That's really sweet of you Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/9/2022 7:27:00 AM Hello Paghunda, I stopped bye to read this poem. I also find this poem romantic. Blessings my friend. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/11/2022 11:58:00 PM I understood this without the explanation Paghunda. This is romantic and beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Have a lovely Valentine’s Day. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 5/23/2022 9:20:00 AM Thanks a lot Connie

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 2/9/2022 1:40:00 AM Paghunda, congratulations on your winning placement in this poetry contest, and thank you for your contribution of this poem. It is beautiful. I hope that you meet your true love soon, and may the merry stars shine on the balcony of your love when you find that precious forever darling of your heart! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 5/23/2022 11:15:00 AM Thank you. Pleasure is all mine. Blessings

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/13/2022 4:59:00 AM You set the scene for a romantic encounter with the girl of your dreams Tom Login to Reply

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed Date: 1/12/2022 10:00:00 AM Different readers will interpret differently as they unwrap its mystery. It is the foremost joy of reading a poem. So, since you have already unraveled the poem's meaning, all i can say beautifully Written, which actually is, beautiful! Thanks - Marshall Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 5/23/2022 11:19:00 AM Thank you Marshall

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed Date: 1/12/2022 9:58:00 AM Dear Poet, I read the poem, and then, when I was about to comment, my feelings, i saw your explanation of the poem! why? I have to say, and say it with love, you have committed a sacrilege! The prime aesthetics of a poem is to keep it wrapped in mystery. And the prime rule of reading a poem is to feel it, without any regards to its actual meaning...... Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 5/23/2022 11:21:00 AM It's a bit disappointing. Some people fail to dig deep to find the meaning hidden beneath metaphors and other figurative devices. So that's why I had to explain it.

Valsa George Date: 1/12/2022 8:27:00 AM Paghunda, may you be granted with sweet talks, soothing walks and starry embrace.... ! Passionate longings so concisely and poetically expressed Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2022 8:12:00 AM - Paghunda, a lovely poem ... I enjoy reading :) - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/10/2022 10:39:00 AM A beautiful verse, evocative of night's tranquility. Delightful reading, Paghunda! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/7/2022 3:35:00 AM Lovely pyramid, Paghunda, succinct and sweet:) Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 1/7/2022 12:06:00 AM Congrats: this poem is on 100 newest poems LIST. And because you value "sweet talks, soothing walks" and for 2022, YOUR PURPOSE IN LIFE & WRITING soothes thy soul ( and of readers who dare).Salaam Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 1/7/2022 12:47:00 AM Oh wow... Thank you. Posted it just last night... Awesome