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night creeps steadily adorned in dark velvet cape… watching as men sleep crickets sound their shrill bullfrogs play tuba and base… shooting stars display day rolls in bright-bold night in surrender recedes… rays of gold invade ~*~ 1/23/12 Annalise Brigham Note: For Linda Marie's "Hodgepodge Haiku Trio" Contest *7th Place

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Date: 2/8/2012 11:03:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Annalise. I am out of town again helping a sick friend. My computer at home died and I bought a new one that I'll install when I get home in a couple weeks. BTW Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2012 5:13:00 AM
Annalise, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/2/2012 4:29:00 AM
wow. very beautiful. love it. contratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:41:00 AM
Good one!Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Annalise! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:11:00 AM
Annalise congrats on your win, "bullfrogs play tuba" excellent..David
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Date: 1/30/2012 4:04:00 PM
I love the personification and imagery or yours, annalise. Congrats on your win with this great set.
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Annalise. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:34:00 PM
congrats Annalise on sweet success in my contest.. a lovely entry..thankxxx luv..
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:30:00 PM
Lovely haiku, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 1/27/2012 5:37:00 AM
A full circle delight, Annalise. HOw'd u do it?...Magical words weaved in this winning write. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:21:00 PM
fine imagery.. lovely description..like it much, jag
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Date: 1/26/2012 5:58:00 PM
I like the surrender of night to day at the end there. Sure to score!!
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:23:00 PM
Exquisite imagery, dear Annalise. I love the way you worked in the crickets and bullfrogs. Very enjoyable read and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Did you get my regular email? I have been trying to call you, but the number I have for you is out of order. Hope you'll send me the right number! Best wishes for success with this lovely piece. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:55:00 PM
Like it alot Annalise, good luck in the contest !! oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/24/2012 4:09:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Winner for sure..Those tree frogs have started their chorus already here where I live..Sara
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:27:00 AM
shimmering write so gloriously scribed!... a winning haiku string!... :) huggs!
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Date: 1/24/2012 2:22:00 AM
Annalise great entry, love them, but adore the second one, good luck..David
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Date: 1/23/2012 9:40:00 PM
I love your trio. Best of luck in the contest! Blessings, Rhonda :)
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