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Niagara's White Shroud

three falls merge as one flows down a vertical drop ~ creates a white shroud Written 13th July 2019.

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Date: 7/21/2022 3:19:00 AM
Have been fortunate to see it ! The white shroud and the rainbows arching here and there together makes a wonderful sight ! Great haiku, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/21/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, it looks amazing, it's on my bucket list. Tom
Date: 7/17/2019 3:07:00 PM
NICE DESCRIPTION, NATURE ART IN POETRy very good dear Tom... We have Foz do Iguaçu falls.. salute alkas.
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Date: 7/18/2019 2:30:00 AM
Thank you Alkas, the wonders of his creation never fail to impress me. Tom
Date: 7/14/2019 2:57:00 PM
Sounds awesome Tom, must be a truly magnificent sight, your words bring it to life! Makes me nostalgic for the Victoria falls - used to see it 3 times a year whilst a border in Zimbabwe then Rhodesia - long story, my next poem. Blessings Jennifer.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/15/2019 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer, the only falls ive seen were in Yosemite a few years back, awesome falls but not as spectacular as Niagara or even the Victoria falls. Tom
Date: 7/14/2019 2:06:00 PM
I would like to see it one day. It's such a famous sight.
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Date: 7/15/2019 12:32:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, it would be awesome to see close up. Tom
Date: 7/14/2019 12:58:00 PM
- A beautiful picture in this haiku - Best winning wishes, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/15/2019 12:33:00 AM
Thanks Anne, hope you had a good time away. Tom
Date: 7/14/2019 4:59:00 AM
Great imagery Tom..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/14/2019 6:09:00 AM
Thank you very much S.O., hope you're well. Tom
Date: 7/13/2019 3:31:00 PM
Beautiful Tom :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/14/2019 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 7/13/2019 11:04:00 AM
Beautifully depicted dearest, Tom! In case you do not know " Niagara " is a native American- Indian word which means " Smoking Waters " . I had the good fortune to visit them on several occasions and once, when a student, I slept on the parking lot in my van! Haha!
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Date: 7/14/2019 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Demetrious, I didn't know what Niagara meant in native american until now and can see why they called it that. They must be incredible to see close up. Tom
Date: 7/13/2019 10:43:00 AM
Very vivid image brilliantly penned :)
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Date: 7/14/2019 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Sandra , happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 7/13/2019 10:39:00 AM
Hi Tom, You created a lovely portrait in a few words. I enjoyed the view! Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you are having a awesome day this far:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/14/2019 6:00:00 AM
Thanks very much Alexis, glad you liked it , was at a wedding and had a great day, hope you did too. Tom
Date: 7/13/2019 8:01:00 AM
Lovely done Tom! I have been privileged to visit the Niagara falls when I was young, they have made a lasting impression, brought to the surface by your lovely poem :) Good luck in the contest, xomo!
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Date: 7/14/2019 5:59:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, to have actually been close up to them must have been an awesome experience for you. Tom
Date: 7/13/2019 7:04:00 AM
Like you Tom, I have never visited, but I imagine the roar of this Wonder of the World must be deafening and exactly like a white shroud. Great Haiku Tom, good luck in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 7/13/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Ann, they are fascinating, three falls going into one, all the water comes from the great lakes. Just off to a wedding. Have a nice weekend. Tom
Date: 7/13/2019 6:44:00 AM
Most definitely a water white shroud...Magnificent force of nature...Good imagery...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/13/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thanks for offering...Saw it sometime ago in the eighties ... when you're young a lot of things pass by you...now I recognize its beauty...and that of Angel falls in Venezuela
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/13/2019 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, have only seen pics, would love to see it close up. Tom

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