Next, Next, Stop
The doors slide open,
but no one gets off.
The voice crackles—
next… next… stop…
and still we sit,
half-formed passengers
clutching phones like prayers
and glancing at windows
that only reflect ourselves back.
The train doesn’t ask
where we’re going—
just tells us
where we might leave.
One girl hums a tune
with no lyrics.
An old man’s eyes
are fixed on nowhere,
as if waiting for a memory
to arrive in reverse.
Next…
What if next never comes?
What if it already passed—
and we didn’t feel it
because we were checking messages
or measuring our loneliness
against another stranger’s sigh?
Stop.
Do we ever?
Some doors open too soon.
Others never open at all.
And sometimes
you only know it was your stop
once the train’s
already gone.
Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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