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It was too loud….perhaps too soft
a bit succinct…..bordered on terse
a rhythm laced with stumbling blocks
its meter….broken sidewalk cracks
Spellcheque…..well it can’t be trusted
nor syllables counted on the fingers
the court of judges finds you guilty
your poetic license is…. REVOKED
3/5/2019
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Contest: You Be The Judge
Sponsored by: Bobby May
Date Created: 3/5/2019
Your Judgment Rating:
I’d give it an A for audacity
a C for weakness and paucity
as N/A’s are never accepted
you read it – that’s what I expected
Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2019
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