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(new snow) the crush of new snow under stalwart boots of youth — mom warms dished out hands 12/14/2019
Writing Challenge, December- Winter Haiku or Senryu - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobe Ode

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Date: 12/26/2019 7:25:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:54:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful senryu ~
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:25:00 AM
Sweet memory, congrats-Peter
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Date: 12/25/2019 2:22:00 PM
- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Kim :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/24/2019 5:49:00 PM
great contrast in your Ku, Kim. Congrats for your win and merry Xmas to you.
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Date: 12/24/2019 5:49:00 PM
or I should say, your RU!!
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Date: 12/19/2019 1:45:00 AM
So prettily done! You are thriving in this poetic genius world in which you live, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thanks! <3
Date: 12/16/2019 1:12:00 PM
Really nice written Kim. I remember those days of warming hands and asking for them to be warmed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2019 2:11:00 PM
For sure! Thank you!
Date: 12/15/2019 2:12:00 PM
I like the turn you gave it in the last line. So important for a good Ku, Kim!
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Date: 12/15/2019 6:54:00 AM
Warming the heart Haiku! Beautifully done dear, Kim!
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Date: 12/14/2019 2:22:00 PM
Exquisite imagery, Kim--a splendid write. All the best.
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Date: 12/14/2019 1:08:00 PM
Wonderful Poem Kim. Best of luck
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