Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

New Sights

The fog is creeping through the trees
The woods have lost many leaves
There's a veil of gray from high to low
All is still, no wind to blow
It looks like smoke has covered land
Autumn tries to understand
Why its color has left so soon
And the birds have changed their tune
Until tomorrow, sun returns
To ease ill tension that churns
Change dismal views to memory
And bring new sights with clarity

Heidi Sands

10/26/22

POTD 10/29/22

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Robertina B. November 9, 2022 at 6:39 AM A belated Congratulations on POTD, Heidi.. A lovely rhyme that flows beautifully! Really enjoyed! Many blessings to you, my friend. Heidi Sands November 9, 2022 at 6:59 AM Thank you very much Robertina. Blessings :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2022 at 12:18 PM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Heidi :) - hugs Heidi Sands October 31, 2022 at 12:21 PM Thank you very much :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2022 at 3:19 AM Very nice, Heidi! Congratulations on POTD! Heidi Sands October 31, 2022 at 4:52 AM Thank you Kim! :)

Daisy Meadows October 29, 2022 at 11:31 PM A good poem about Autumn. Congratulations on your POTD. Heidi Sands October 30, 2022 at 2:35 AM Thanks so much Jeanette :)

Valsa George October 29, 2022 at 10:26 PM The transition from autumn to winter is suggested through beautiful images ! Congratulations Heidi on your well deserved POTD Heidi Sands October 30, 2022 at 2:34 AM Thank you Valsa. Your comment is much appreciated :)

Brandy Nicole October 29, 2022 at 9:16 PM Change is in the air, as "Autumn tries to understand." (I understand completely). It's a beautiful season to embrace and your thoughts are simply breathtaking. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Heidi Sands October 30, 2022 at 2:33 AM Thank you very much Brandy. Blessings and hugs :)

Eve Roper October 29, 2022 at 8:37 PM Congratulations of POTD.. <3 Heidi Sands October 30, 2022 at 2:33 AM Thank you Eve :)

Constance La France October 29, 2022 at 4:43 PM Heidi, so deep and wonderful, love your poem ,congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY, honor, blessings Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 7:05 PM Thank you very much Conatance. Blessings :)

Tania Kitchin October 29, 2022 at 4:03 PM Heidi, congratulations on POTD, nice Autumn imagery! Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 7:04 PM Thank you Tania :)

Suzanne Delaney October 29, 2022 at 1:24 PM Excellent verse, Heidi: Congrats on POTD. Enjoy the accolades. Hugs, SuZ Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 7:04 PM Thank you Suz :)

L Milton Hankins October 29, 2022 at 9:07 AM Nice write, Heidi. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.! Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 9:15 AM Thank you Milton. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 29, 2022 at 8:49 AM Back with big congrats on the honor of your POTD! Linda Alice Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 8:54 AM Thank you very much Linda. I hope you enjoy the day ! :)

Susan Lawrence October 29, 2022 at 6:06 AM Beautiful visuals Heidi ! You transported me to the foggy woods instantly ! I love - Autumn tries to understand . Lovely writing . Congratulations on POTD! Susan :) Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 6:20 AM Hi Susan. Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit October 29, 2022 at 5:34 AM Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Heidi. Enjoy your day. Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 5:46 AM Thank you so very much Vijay. I hope you have a great day :)

Mike Gentile October 29, 2022 at 5:29 AM Heidi, a big congratulations on your POTD honors for this seasonal delight full of vivid imagery! One of your best! Happy Saturday xxoo Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 5:30 AM Thank you very much Mike. I appreciate your support always. Happy Saturday :) xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury October 29, 2022 at 5:14 AM Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear Heidi. Change of seasons is portrayed beautifully. Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 5:17 AM Thank you kindly Malabika :)

Beryl Edmonds October 29, 2022 at 3:27 AM A wonderful write Heidi, we’re getting changes to the seasons sadly and we all know the reasons why. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle -:) Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 4:41 AM Thank you Belle. I appreciate your comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 29, 2022 at 3:13 AM I am so happy to see the honor, of POTD, bestowed on your poem, my dearest friend, Heidi! Congratulations and hugs! Be blessed! Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 4:40 AM Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your support. Hugs :)

Christuraj Alex October 29, 2022 at 1:35 AM The transition and the season that goes and the one comes to stay - All in a very visual manner and feast-to-the-senses- manner said beautifully. Congratulations! Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 2:18 AM Thank you very much Christuraj. I appreciate your nice comment :)

Tom Cunningham October 29, 2022 at 12:36 AM Back with congratulations Heidi on the honour of POTD, have a great weekend.. Tom Heidi Sands October 29, 2022 at 2:17 AM Oh I just found out from your comment. A nice surprise. Thank you very much :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 28, 2022 at 4:34 PM Love these new sights Heidi :) Every moment, every corner, every season. Beautiful! Heidi Sands October 28, 2022 at 4:50 PM I am happy to hear that Linda. Thank you :)

Alexis Y. October 28, 2022 at 7:41 AM Hi Heidi, You painted a vivid picture with words in this well written poem. Well done. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis Heidi Sands October 28, 2022 at 11:48 AM Hi Alexis. Thank you for the kind comment. I hope you have a nice weekend :)

Harry Horsman October 27, 2022 at 9:19 PM Oh so visual, Heidi, truly lovely poetry..Harry Heidi Sands October 28, 2022 at 4:49 AM Thank you Harry. Nice to see your comment :)

Gershon Wolf October 27, 2022 at 6:44 PM Bring on those 'new sights,' I say! Nicely woven poem, Heidi. Here's to 'clarity!' Light and Illumination, Gershon Heidi Sands October 28, 2022 at 4:48 AM Ok Gershon. There are always plenty. Thank you for the positive comment :)

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2022 at 10:57 AM Loved the scenes you painted, Heidi. A FAVE from me for this excellent display of imagism poetry. Heidi Sands October 27, 2022 at 11:09 AM So nice to see your comment Vijay. I am happy you love it. Much appreciated. Thank you for considering it a Fave :)

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