New Sights

The fog is creeping through the trees The woods have lost many leaves There's a veil of gray from high to low All is still, no wind to blow It looks like smoke has covered land Autumn tries to understand Why its color has left so soon And the birds have changed their tune Until tomorrow, sun returns To ease ill tension that churns Change dismal views to memory And bring new sights with clarity Heidi Sands 10/26/22 POTD 10/29/22

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Robertina B.

Date: 11/9/2022 6:39:00 AM

A belated Congratulations on POTD, Heidi.. A lovely rhyme that flows beautifully! Really enjoyed! Many blessings to you, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2022 6:59:00 AM

Thank you very much Robertina. Blessings :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2022 12:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Heidi :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2022 12:21:00 PM

Thank you very much :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/31/2022 3:19:00 AM

Very nice, Heidi! Congratulations on POTD!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2022 4:52:00 AM

Thank you Kim! :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/29/2022 11:31:00 PM

A good poem about Autumn. Congratulations on your POTD.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2022 2:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Jeanette :)

Valsa George

Date: 10/29/2022 10:26:00 PM

The transition from autumn to winter is suggested through beautiful images ! Congratulations Heidi on your well deserved POTD

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2022 2:34:00 AM

Thank you Valsa. Your comment is much appreciated :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/29/2022 9:16:00 PM

Change is in the air, as "Autumn tries to understand." (I understand completely). It's a beautiful season to embrace and your thoughts are simply breathtaking. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2022 2:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Brandy. Blessings and hugs :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/29/2022 8:37:00 PM

Congratulations of POTD.. <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2022 2:33:00 AM

Thank you Eve :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/29/2022 4:43:00 PM

Heidi, so deep and wonderful, love your poem ,congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY, honor, blessings

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 7:05:00 PM

Thank you very much Conatance. Blessings :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/29/2022 4:03:00 PM

Heidi, congratulations on POTD, nice Autumn imagery!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Tania :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/29/2022 1:24:00 PM

Excellent verse, Heidi: Congrats on POTD. Enjoy the accolades. Hugs, SuZ

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Suz :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/29/2022 9:07:00 AM

Nice write, Heidi. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 9:15:00 AM

Thank you Milton. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/29/2022 8:49:00 AM

Back with big congrats on the honor of your POTD! Linda Alice

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 8:54:00 AM

Thank you very much Linda. I hope you enjoy the day ! :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/29/2022 8:33:00 AM

Such a lovely verse, Heidi. Your imagery brings it alive so clearly. Congratulations on this being chosen as POTD!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 10/29/2022 6:06:00 AM

Beautiful visuals Heidi ! You transported me to the foggy woods instantly ! I love - Autumn tries to understand . Lovely writing . Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 6:20:00 AM

Hi Susan. Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/29/2022 5:34:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Heidi. Enjoy your day.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 5:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much Vijay. I hope you have a great day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/29/2022 5:29:00 AM

Heidi, a big congratulations on your POTD honors for this seasonal delight full of vivid imagery! One of your best! Happy Saturday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 5:30:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. I appreciate your support always. Happy Saturday :) xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/29/2022 5:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear Heidi. Change of seasons is portrayed beautifully.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 5:17:00 AM

Thank you kindly Malabika :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/29/2022 3:27:00 AM

A wonderful write Heidi, we’re getting changes to the seasons sadly and we all know the reasons why. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle -:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 4:41:00 AM

Thank you Belle. I appreciate your comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/29/2022 3:13:00 AM

I am so happy to see the honor, of POTD, bestowed on your poem, my dearest friend, Heidi! Congratulations and hugs! Be blessed!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 4:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your support. Hugs :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/29/2022 1:35:00 AM

The transition and the season that goes and the one comes to stay - All in a very visual manner and feast-to-the-senses- manner said beautifully. Congratulations!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2022 2:18:00 AM

Thank you very much Christuraj. I appreciate your nice comment :)