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New Moons

Moon spills over like expresso coffee, withheld in a pitch pitcherlike corset — Where long her skin's lantern once mothered me, over tonight are but marble shadows, Craters' paled apparition in my sky — those cold breasts now an invisible blur; This adrenaline dark when light's in wane, virgin drinks in her cup's phase finally; Still through a kohl tongue she kisses my hate — this moon reads newly with every pause.

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Date: 1/22/2025 9:47:00 PM
A very enjoyable read. Your imagery and wordplay are at their best in this awesome offering. Bravo!
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Date: 1/18/2025 7:15:00 AM
Wow!Such interesting and impactful imagery!
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Date: 1/17/2025 2:27:00 PM
I agree with Kim such creative imagery, Paige
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Date: 1/17/2025 10:44:00 AM
Vivid, creative imagery, Paige. Totally unique. Enjoyed it. Blessings!
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Date: 1/17/2025 8:17:00 AM
Captivating, moody poetry with vivid imagery that makes your scathing descriptions come to life, Paige!
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Date: 1/17/2025 7:36:00 AM
interesting, atmospheric little piece with good imagery...thanks for visiting my page :)
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Date: 1/17/2025 4:34:00 AM
Kohl tongue and the opening line really did stand out for me dear sweet paige! Youv written such a descriptive and metaphorical poem that flows in such an impeccable manner! So much depth in what youv deliverd here! You always have a way with words and this is no exception! Profound! Loved it! Sending you light always
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Date: 1/16/2025 11:15:00 PM
your stark images come alive, paige... ' she kisses my hate...' well done, take a bow!
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