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Beguiled, I dash out in the rain While you, yes, you catch my embrace-- Lips trembling on a night of leaves... The petals winging through fine mist new love-talk drones, as kiss enchants In flamed surrender, I reply: 'Though pleasantries begin to gush; O halt your language; let actions work.' 3.16.2019 What I Love Contest of Maureen Mc Greavy

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Date: 3/24/2019 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 3/22/2019 9:16:00 AM
What can I say, I love this ;) Congratulations and thank you Nette! xomo
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:13:00 AM
Very seductive indeed, Nette, I surrender. Nice one.
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Date: 3/17/2019 3:24:00 AM
"Lips trembling on a night of leaves..." I could not help wondering which "leaves" you meant. I am still pondering this. Well done, Nette!
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Date: 3/16/2019 6:00:00 PM
The passion in this romantic poem grabs the reader's attention and it is sustained by your creative imagery. Best wishes in the contest, Nette!
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Date: 3/16/2019 3:50:00 PM
Well--the love talk did cause flamed surrender..loved that ending line.
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