- New Life Awakens -

With a loving heart,
filled with peace and harmony
In the afterbirth new life emerges
An eternal optimist in Spite of living

Starlight sparkles in this globe softly glistens
Everything seems to be perfectly normal
Gentle spirit refines where the thought is good
Dream you shine a warm sunbeam gift

We live for truth and justice sake
The numbered days and duration of happy feelings
A glimpses of human life takes shape
Golden delicious fruit of Eden

Happiness can not be conquered, 
it must be openly received
A sun melting inside warm thoughts
Staring across the horizon clouds pearl white

My desires, my needs, my happiness
As fallen people with meaningless deeds
Dreamy cotton skies echo into one song
The ability to grasp facts of nature around us

Faraway mountains sailing yearns
Over the hills a warm thought in breeze blows 
Starlight twinkles in the eyes of a dream 
Coasting along on a deep blue sea wave kiss





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  25.08.2015 
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Devnath  Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Wow! i loved the line very much "A sun melting inside warm thoughts Staring across the horizon clouds pearl white" where from we can filter out thoughts. Beautifully done my lovely lovely friend. Beautiful 7+ i feel. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 12:43 PM
- I'm really glad you noticed that line ..... I love this, me too :))) - Thanks for the warm words a 7 and pleasant visit, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:05 AM
thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a lovely week
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:38 AM
- Congratulations to you also, always a pleasure writing with you dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:03 AM
thank you anne lise for the pleasure of this write passing you a warm congratulation with smiles
May Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Warm sunbeam gifts light up the heart with happiness...Beautiful co-write Anne...
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:01 AM
- Thank you for comments and visits, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and Liam here on POTD!! Outstanding co-write by two extraordinarily talented poets!! Another Homerun here with this write. Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 2:49 PM
- Dear Gary, thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Beautifully penned by two incredible poets and congratulations on poem of the day ~~
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 7:05 AM
- B.W., thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 2:56 AM
You two made POTD! :) Congratulations, Sunshine! Hugs....
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 3:52 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 2:55 AM
You two made POTD! :) Congratulations, Sunshine! Hugs....
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 3:52 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Wow, two great poets, one great poem! As I was reading this, I thought, this is something liam would like! Then I read you both wrote it!!! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 3:51 AM
- It is always a pleasure to write with Liam - Thank you for visit, and comments, Arthur - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:44 PM
- Thanks for the congrats, Dorian - I've been very busy with "family duties" this month .... no time to so much "soup" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Robertson Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Lovely, This poem makes life worth it all.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:46 PM
- Thank you Milton, words that make it worth to continue writing !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 3:40 AM
Anne Lise, another gem from both of you!!! I enjoyed the imagery, wisdom stitched in the lines.. I read below that its chosen as poem of the day!! my BIG CONGRATULATIONS!! HUGS!!~Olive Eloisa =')
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:50 PM
- Both Liam and me very much appreciate getting the title p.o.t.d. :) - I've been very busy with "family duties" this month .... no time to so much "soup"- Thanks for visiting, congratulations and comments, dear Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 3:41 AM
belated thank you for greeting me in my birthday.. been off for awhile cause of holidays.. hugs and I hope you doing alright.. =')~Olive ELoisa praying a rain of blessings to you always.!=')
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 8:28 PM
A lovely duet, well done both. Viv x
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 7:13 AM
- Glad you like it Viv, thank you for the lovely comment - I wish you a nice day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day to both of you another wonderful write. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 7:13 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 3:29 PM
another well-deserved POTD from a great tandem.. hope you are well, anne.. huggs!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 7:11 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Nette - I wish you a wonderful day ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ransom Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 3:28 PM
my name is Arsen and i make music to be honest I'm sort of new in this area but i made some songs that I really liked and i was curious to see how they would turn out if they had lyric and voice on them but unfortunately I'm not talented like you and I'm stuck i wanted to know if you could do me a favor and choose a song and make a lyric for it and i will do my best in recording and share the result with you. well thanks for your time and I hope to hear from you. with many thanks Arsen https://soundcloud.com/ransom-frozen/follow-me https://soundcloud.com/ransom-frozen/sunrise http://soundcloud.com/ransom-frozen/in-my-mind-in-my-hart and my email address is : [email protected]
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 3:55 AM
- This is a co-write with my friend Liam - I "own" only 50% of this poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nau Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Nice job you two and Congradulations on the POTD!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 1:04 PM
- Edlynn, thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nunez Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Another beautiful product of your collab, Liam and Anne. congrats on Poem of the Day! hugs!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:35 PM
- Dear Kim, thanks for the nice congratulating, always a pleasure to get credit for our work - I am very happy and proud of my "co - partner", Liam is excellent skilled !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Boddie Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 10:00 AM
with each new awakening....Love is just anticipating....where it can find its newest home....and your heart is where it belongs....this is a great poem of the day....;)
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:37 PM
- In your own heart, my friend Eric - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - I wish you a wonderful day ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:49 AM
What a beautiful poem for new birth. Congrats for POD!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:38 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romaine Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Hey Anne Lise, BIG congratulations to you and Liam on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTD!! An absolutely excellent work of art and collaboration and a beautiful treatise on life and happiness. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:42 PM
- Neva, thanks for the nice congratulating, always a pleasure to get credit for our work - I am very happy and proud of my "co - partner", Liam is excellent skilled !! - Glad you like it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ramaker Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:17 AM
love it!!!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:39 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and comments, Dennis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kayode Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 7:52 AM
A well crafted poem Anne,congrats as the POTD...huggs
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:40 PM
- Kayod5, thank you for friendly visits and congratulations - Miss you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Ann-Lise,this is beautiful. Great collaboration! Congrats to you and Liam for having this piece get selected as poem of the day:-)Alexis
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 7:59 AM
- Both Liam and me very much appreciate getting the title p.o.t.d. :)- Thanks for visiting and comments, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Anne-Lise, wonderfully penned by two, and thanks for visiting my monster poem
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 5:44 AM
- B.W., thanks for the nice visit and comments on Liam`s and my poems - New Life Awakens - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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