New Friends - Collaboration

I've been getting to know really well
my new friend with so much to tell.
We've got similar work
and we share the same quirk:
Our sore bodies are giving us hell!

by Andrea Dietrich

For her friendship I'm in her debt.
Though I like Soup, it's not home yet.
So with her kind words
I feel like I'm heard
And not a nobody poet. 

by Susan Burch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/21/2011 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:53:00 PM
congrats on your collabo win with your friend andrea, this is cute, such a nice little community here on the soup :-)
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:13:00 AM
great job congrats on your win..cory
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:51:00 PM
Nice win with your new friend Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:05:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on super seventh place win with this collaboration with Susan.. a special blend u two are.. awesome piece luv..
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Date: 8/31/2011 5:33:00 PM
Nice to make new friends on the soup. That is how we expand and work together bring poetry alive. love phyl
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Date: 8/31/2011 6:49:00 AM
You two work so well together - lovely write from you both : )
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Date: 8/30/2011 12:26:00 AM
wow! you are just making new friends left to right.... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/29/2011 4:05:00 PM
Hey, it's great that you and Susan have similar work -- teaching, I presume. But Susan is definitely not a "nobody poet." Hope she realizes how much we all enjoy her work. Great collaboration, Andrea and Susan. Best wishes in the contest! (And, no, I don't care how messy anyone else's house is. All is cool with friends' homes.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2011 3:56:00 PM
What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it you have written from your soul. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Andrea and Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 1:26:00 PM
You are so not a nobody poet Susan, this is a really sweet collaboration Andrea, wishing both of you all the best for Tracie's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:27:00 PM
nice friendship going on here.. cheers to you, andie and susan, for a well-oiled collab.. still in a countryside villa resting and goind to the carousels.. :) huggs with winning wishes. miss ya! :)
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:05:00 AM
A great limerick you two! And a nice tribute to friends. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:31:00 AM
very cool both of u Andrea on this piece .. simple but unique..good luck to u both.. great friendships are made on PS... and yes the red car is a true story ..of course..what else with me? haha..luv..
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:31:00 AM
very good ladies, not nobody poets, great flow of thought, you ought of know it..
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:27:00 PM
Nice collaboration with Ms. Burch! What type of work are you doing that results in a sore body? I work as an ESL instructor which does not cause any physical stress. I wish you well. Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:16:00 PM
I love how Soup will bring people together! I'm impressed with both of your poetry. You're both very talented! Great work!! Best of luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:35:00 PM
A very sweet collaboration my friend yielding such a lovely sweet and beautiful writes. My good wishes for your contest entry. I have placed a new Poem dedicated to Dalia Lama and hope you would enjoy it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:34:00 PM
Beautiful Collaboration poem in Limerick..best wishes.
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:29:00 PM
Susan, noone is a nobody poet, though sometimes some do their best to make others feel that way, you will rarely(if ever) find that here on the soup. Great job to both of you.
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:55:00 PM
you are so right. She is in no way a nobody poet! and I hope she grows to feel less like that here in time! She is very clever!
Date: 8/28/2011 9:24:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on A struggle. believe me this is the real event of 1994. Andrea
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:13:00 PM
A smile-maker, you two! Enjoyed the duet! :-) Winning wishes sent to both of you, Cyndi
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Date: 8/28/2011 8:49:00 PM
Lovely collaboration with a soft humour, andrea and susan
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