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No talking at night, No breakfast together, No sparks in your eyes. Busy most of the time, out from this empty house. No kisses in the morning, nor late at night when you come back. No flowers on Valentine's day, no more boleros to dance. My dear husband, I'm so sorry to misunderstand the way you are. Dear husband I made a mistake, I drank the wrong cocktail on a depressing day, thinking you were cheating me in a Hotel with no name. Meanwhile, I was drowning in a glass of champagne, dancing a new bolero with a stranger. It was for you that I did it, it was my bad interpretation, my mistake no to ask. Now, that is too late, I understood that you didn't care about those small things, which really were important for me at that time, when you were working for me to have the best, while I was dancing a bolero with somedoy else.

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Date: 9/9/2023 4:26:00 AM
My friend, this is a truly great new creation. I so fully agree with the very fine comments made by my friends Bill and Christina. A fav for me. God bless you.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/9/2023 4:41:00 AM
I'm glad you liked. Thanks so much. Hugs..!
Date: 9/6/2023 4:57:00 PM
Deeply moving poetry, Maria. To share feeling that are personal, but need to be shared, so others may avoid the pain you feel looking back. Whether real or fiction, the message is the same. Spouses need to talk about their feeling and what is important to them, or the relationship will deteriorate. The photo match your poem well. Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/7/2023 12:35:00 AM
Hello Bill. Thank you for passing by and for your lovely comment. You are right, comunication is very important. Have a nice day.!
Date: 9/4/2023 1:08:00 PM
Such a touching, poignant poem Maria. Well written with the title enhancing the poem and saying it all. The last two lines really stood out. Well done! I enjoyed it. Blessings to you.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/4/2023 1:18:00 PM
Hello Christina. Thank you for your lovely comment. Glad you liked it. Have a nice evening...!xxx

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