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The corn is sweeping low; her tasseled head is bent, as dying souls lament about the waning glow. This life too quickly fades, thin mists that pale the glade. In furrows dark and dry, the kernels, hard, that fall beneath the autumn squall, now lie alone. Awry the seed the wind propelled to propagate the veld. So life reflects the corn that dies to bloom reborn. Copyright, August 16, 2015 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 9/28/2015 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur deep write n superb first place win Faye!
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Date: 9/20/2015 10:45:00 AM
Beauty and wise observation about life, Faye. Congrats on your awesome win!
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Date: 9/19/2015 9:43:00 PM
Great write and win Faye...Congrats
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Date: 9/19/2015 7:58:00 PM
A 7 for sure, Faye! It's easy to see why your lovely poem won. Janice
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Date: 9/19/2015 6:30:00 PM
Congrats on your BIG win, Faye! Excellent theme and imagery :)
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:36:00 PM
Excellent writing from you , Faye. I was not surprised to see your name appear when I went to see my winners' list. BIG congrats on a top win.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:19:00 PM
Hello, Faye, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 9/19/2015 2:24:00 PM
That's the cycle of life that keeps nature alive and beautiful. Creative and excellently penned, Faye. ~ Congratulations on a deserved first place! ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 9/19/2015 12:45:00 PM
Excellent Faye, beautifully written.
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Date: 9/19/2015 12:40:00 PM
This is so lovely, Faye. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. I echo what Eileen said about your final two lines...awesome. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/19/2015 12:31:00 PM
:) Congrats on this lovely piece, Faye...Yes...nature is a beautiful lesson book for us. You lines just flowed, and I particularly liked those two ending lines. Wonderful. Hugs
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations Faye: I loved life reflects the corn. Great Win!
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:10:00 AM
This is wonderful, Faye !! Big congrats to you !!! Well deserved!
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:05:00 AM
Love the imagery Faye many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this much
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